The Void

Headphones on, the music plays
Open my eyes 'n stare at empty days
Voiceless sounds in hollow halls
Not one echo rebounds on empty walls

The Void is deafening, sun is cold
A needless reckoning has taken hold
Gray moon sets on these eyes of blue
And there's nothing left of my memory of you

I called and cried
Over vacuumed space
And so was denied
All time and place
Where you used to be

Echoes of noise, nothing is clear
Talk to the wind like I'm not even here
Everything's dated, but you wouldn't concede
The Void was there before You and Me

You said I was wrong to be a man
But all I did was make my stand
Well it's pointless now to say you see
There is nothing left of you and me

I called and cried
Across empty space
Coz even if you lied
It hurt to waste
What we used to be

I called and cried
Across empty space
Coz even if you lied
It hurt to waste
What we used to be

I cried and died
A hundred times
I've been denied
For the last time
And the Void takes me
Like it took you

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Headphones on, the music plays
Open my eyes 'n stare at empty days
Voiceless sounds in hollow halls
Not one echo rebounds on empty walls

This got to my heart before I even finished reading it. You write AMAZING, heartfelt songs that I really can relate to. It's beautiful.

That was amazing,

Angel thanks so much, I'm always very pleased when you like something I write, because you know I love everything you do!!

ShadowLee thanks, I appreciate your time and especially the compliment!

PS: Oreoz?? ..... COOKIIIEEEES!!!!

Originally Posted by MoonRide42

Angel thanks so much, I'm always very pleased when you like something I write, because you know I love everything you do!!

ShadowLee thanks, I appreciate your time and especially the compliment!

PS: Oreoz?? ..... COOKIIIEEEES!!!!

Heh heh, your very welcome xD
I can't seem to stop reading the lyrics over and over again LoL they are awesome

Ps:] Yup, so say hai to each and every one before you eat em Lmao!!, xD

Their great.

Thanks Mon

This one definitely has so much truth and feeling to it, that it has to come out as wonderful! I love how you transition towards the end, so sad and luring with sentiments. One of my favourites now!

Thanks so much Nanashi, and in truth it seemed very easy to build the progression with this one. But I'm glad to say it progressed all the way into a void of non-memory because this is another one that I didn't really "enjoy" writing.

But now I'm reminded of something I heard several years ago, about manic depression (maybe I already mentioned this somewhere else): Apparently a lot of genius-creativity is accomplished during periods of severe manic mood swings. So is that true for every creative inspiration?? Am I manic depressive too?? Are we all??? ... no I don't think so ... well I hope not anyway!

This was a very well done piece. I'm not sure how you intend this to sound with music and what-not, but the only suggestion I have is in regards to the second chorus segment. It seems like the repetition of it may sound somewhat aukward on its own, so you could try and merge it together with the last segment to turn it into a single free-flowing thought rather than saying one thing on it's own, saying it again on it's own, and then bringing in something fresh? It may be fine the way it is, but it just seems like it might be too redundant unless you merge it with something else.

I just wrote and (I thought) submitted a comment, but it disappeared?? .... maybe it's just hiding in a queue somewhere .... well, again ....

Thanks much for the tips! You've written/arranged and performed quite a few songs right? I always struggle with the finish, and in the few that I've actually finished the choruses changed at the end, just letting the music take it where it needed to go. Great advice, I'll catalog it for sure, thanks again!

Moon, this is my fav lyrics from you haha I love em I can't stop reading em xD

I think as you create the music it will come together well for you. Good song.

Originally Posted by LyricsAngel

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Headphones on, the music plays
Open my eyes 'n stare at empty days
Voiceless sounds in hollow halls
Not one echo rebounds on empty walls

This got to my heart before I even finished reading it. You write AMAZING, heartfelt songs that I really can relate to. It's beautiful.

I totally agree with LyricsAngel. The first verse is beatiful! For me this is really poetic lyrics. I love "Voiceless sounds in hollow halls". Awesome lyrics Moonride42!

Thanks so much Shadow, Wayne and Hugo. This was not my favorite kind of emotional expression at all, but I had a good feeling about how the lyrics came out. I'll probably change a couple of words or phrases, but scoring the music and singing it out loud should work that out. Thanks again

I would want to hear it in music!!!!!!!!!!!