::r3gr3t::

R3GR3T
This song was mainly a poem but it turned out to have a melody to it when I wrote it on paper xD

[intro]
you thought I was playing, you thought I told you a LIE. But when I told you I'm not "just 'sayin"' you turned into an emotional type o' guy. And I knooow you dropped dead, when I left. I come back- then you ignore me as if I, NEVER EXISTED

[rap/melody part, sung fastly and with an English accent]

Wellllllll~ sorry for bothering you, Oh!
I forgot to give you this love, Note!
Since you don't seem to "give a care", Now!
(and you seemed to have moved onnnn..)

[guitar plays, similar to Fallout Boy: Dance Dance]

[chorus]
I R3GR3T, giving you all my LOVE, and SECRETS.
And sharing my life with YOU! R3GR3T, hurting myself, instead of YOU.
(Run away!) From things that make you so glad.
(You keep it cool.) and stay by the things that make you sad!
(Introvert!) come out and play with, me. And see. How~ misery loves ye

[verse]
(attack!) when least expected.
(like that!) I knew things weren't "alright"
Your full of crap (slashed my heart and wrecked it)
I Knew that they seemed something Alike..

[fast rap/melody part again]
welllllll~ sorry for making your life JOY.
Forgot you weren't "that" kinda BOY,
Because your sorrow and you always complain about things..

[guitar plays]

[chorus]
(yes!) I R3GR3T, giving you all my LOVE, and SECRETS.
And sharing my life with YOU! R3GR3T, hurting myself, instead of YOU.
(Run away!) From things that make you so glad.
(You keep it cool.) and stay by the things that make you sad!
(Introvert!) come out and play with, me. And see. How~ misery loves ye

[sad piano intrudes..]

[verse]
I could never quite "get" you, at all..
And enough with despair, you'll get nowhere if there..
And I'm through with deny, and all of the lies.
Today... The feeling, is somewhat new, and something like, you...

[chorus played differently, softly, with a different melody]
I R3GR3T, giving you all.. My hope... Through secrets, to sharing my life with- you..
R3GR3T, constantly.. Remembering.. You.

Please, by all means comment and tell me of you liked it or not
Feel free to private message me and ask about the song cause I'd be happy to explain why cause it's simple(I-I guess I could say that o_o").
Thank you for your time.

Any likes? Any critisisim? Nothing? Mmkay LoL xD

I think this is quite good! I'm not British but since you said part of it is sung with a British accent, that's how my first words came out
This seems very well developed. I think the lyrical flow is good, and the point is strong. Nice work!

Awhhs, thanks lots ^^*

Yeah~ the accent seemed to fit the song better than a regular american accent lol

Eh? Nice spam -.-"

Oh look someone erased it yay!

These lyrics are so rad! Yours are definitely way better than mine by the way

Awwh thank yew so much Elk,
But I still don't believe that mine are gettin good,
urs are so much better ^^

Did almost anyone notice that any song I write has ether an electric guitar or a piano as the main instruments :0 omfg

In other words, it's ether a rock song or a sad one.

If not than electronica xD