I'm back! Here's a rap concept I'm going to develop.

I wish it was possible for me to do,
The impossible thing and just talk to you.
Cos there's a couple things that I need to say.
But you'll never read this anyway.

I'm like, Honest when I say you're a drug to me.
And when you get up in my head I'm a thug to be
You make every single guy feel just the same.
And when you hit the brain they're nothing but insane.

You make a priest to a killer. Turn a monk to a sinner.
With a minimal dose, expose the gross inner.
You're the reason that I wanna have sex.
Why I go to the gym and do too many reps.

You're the reason I overslept,
You're the strong smell that got left on my vest.
I lay in bed with your hairs on my chest.
And I never could have guessed that you start with a test.

And the rest is Osterone.
I'm not talking 'bout a chick that I lust you know.
Testosterone, you are dangerous.
And one day you will make me infamous.

I'm still in love with every word comin' out of your mouth.

This is mighty fine man. Straight up, nothing fancy or obtuse, just clear as a bell in a nice lyrical style. "thug to be" is probably my favorite line.

That's skill right there!! Flow on point, it just rolls off the tongue real nice!! Got nowt bad to say...

Defo keep spittin..

Stay up

JD

Good ****. You gotta beat for it yet? As I read it, the 99 Problems bet comes to mind....

So if you're into hip hop, I could totally use a critique of my shi t. Yea it's long, but Monche's had a couple ten minute trax too. So besides that, how bout an opinion?

-Trilly