...criticism?

Floating at sea alone.
Maybe it's the best for me.
I can get myself out of this,
but don't forget the rest of us.

And you'll sit and watch the sky.
And you'll sit and watch the sky.
And you'll sit and watch the sky.
And you'll sit and watch the skies.

Look around what do you see?
A reflection of stupidity.
Give us hope and rest easy.
Too much too much makes me queasy.

Pupils of what's next in line.
It's a shame that they're mine.
They look up to me for gifts.
But do they know they don't exist?

And you'll sit and watch the sky.
And you'll sit and watch the sky.
And you'll sit and watch the sky.
And you'll sit and watch the skies,
over and over and over.

Will you,
be around,
to answer my call,
when I'm underground?

I'm so scared of death,
it makes me scream.
Come pick me up,
out of this horrible dream.

And you'll sit and wonder why.

^^... there you go again with wonderful lyrics, zero,

-S.L.S-

These are really good lyrics =)

And I'll sit and wonder why this made me think about...everything.
Your songs are so true, and heartfelt, and plain amazing. Congratulations.

Originally Posted by LyricsAngel

And I'll sit and wonder why this made me think about...everything.
Your songs are so true, and heartfelt, and plain amazing. Congratulations.

I'm pretty positive that is the nicest thing anyone's said to me in a long time. Thank you.

I'm new here. Hope ya don't mind if I jump in.

Very good writing. Intro verse grabs your attention. Chorus is simple yet perfect for this particular song. From beginning to end there is a since urgency here that makes the listener concerned for you. The last verse and outro line is nothing short of genius. You lean toward the obscure. And, you leave the listener wanting a little more, and that's a good thing.

I am impressed.
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