For A Friendship To End

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  1. LyricsAngel's Avatar

    LyricsAngel said:

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    My long lost friend, was our friendship just a lie?
    Or is this your way of saying goodbye?
    Every single wound will heal, I promise you
    But promises never come true
    I don’t wanna hear, not anymore!
    Walk out that door like you did before

    -Chorus-
    For a friendship to end, it must’ve been one
    And you were never my friend, so I’m done
    As the pictures burn, I’m out on the highway
    Wasn’t it time I finally get it my way?
    So this song is for a friendship to end
    But now really, when were you my friend?

    I should’ve known, forever was not real
    Cause as you’re moving on, I’m standing still
    ‘I’ll always be here for you’, you said to me
    But you promised so many things...
    And I don’t want them, not anymore!
    Get out that door, and don’t come back for more!

    -Chorus-
    For a friendship to end, it must’ve been one
    And you were never my friend, so I’m done
    As the pictures burn, I’m out on the highway
    Wasn’t it time I finally get it my way?
    So this song is for a friendship to end
    But now really, when were you my friend?

    -Bridge-
    Now as I think it over, I swear I was blind
    And I’m showing myself things I couldn’t find
    All this time…

    -Chorus-
    For a friendship to end, it must’ve been one
    And you were never my friend, so I’m done
    As the pictures burn, I’m out on the highway
    Wasn’t it time I finally get it my way?
    So this song is for a friendship to end
    But now really, when were you my friend?
    [Today] is the *tomorrow* you worried about ~yesterday~.Live for the ♥next day♥, not the ◘day before◘.
     
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    OneSongWayne said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by LyricsAngel View Post

    -Verse-
    My long lost friend, was our friendship just a lie?
    Or is this your way of saying goodbye?
    Every single wound will heal, I promise you
    But promises never come true
    I don’t wanna hear, not anymore!
    Walk out that door like you did before

    -Chorus-
    For a friendship to end, it must’ve been one
    And you were never my friend, so I’m done
    As the pictures burn, I’m out on the highway
    Wasn’t it time I finally get it my way?
    So this song is for a friendship to end.
    But now really, when were you my friend?

    -Verse-
    I should’ve known, forever was not real
    Cause as you’re moving on, I’m standing still
    ‘I’ll always be here for you’, you said to me
    But you promised so many things...
    And I don’t want them, not anymore!
    Get out that door, and don’t come back for more!

    -Chorus-
    For a friendship to end, it must’ve been one
    And you were never my friend, so I’m done
    As the pictures burn, I’m out on the highway
    Wasn’t it time I finally get it my way?
    So this song is for a friendship to end.
    But now really, when were you my friend?

    -Bridge-
    Now as I think it over, I swear I was blind
    And I’m showing myself things I couldn’t find
    All this time…

    -Chorus-
    For a friendship to end, it must’ve been one
    And you were never my friend, so I’m done
    As the pictures burn, I’m out on the highway
    Wasn’t it time I finally get it my way?
    But now really, when were you my friend?
    So this song is, for a friendship to end.
    For a friendship to end.
    This is a great song. If it was Country it would be a sad country song. I really like the way the song comes together. Structure supports this song well. It feels to me that the title is the hook for this song. I think the hook works well for you. I really like your writing style. Your tallent shows. This is a song I would expect to see used in a movie. I'm new here and have only seen a few of the others work, but I am impressed with the quality of what i've seen here.

    "Last chorus above is only a suggestion for the hook".

    Excellent writing,
    W....
    Last edited by OneSongWayne; 01-29-2011 at 02:18 AM.
     
  3. MoonRide*r*'s Avatar

    MoonRide*r* said:

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    This one makes me really sad so I hope you won't mind if I don't say too much. But you know I love the way you write
    There is no glamour in sudden death, and nobody ever wins a war.
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    ShadowLeeSharp said:

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    *sighs*
    I love the way you wrote the lyrics, is beautiful.
    But WHYYYYY must it be so sad T-T I can feel every pain shoot through my body as I read this.

    But overall what's more important is how beautiful these lyrics are, well done angel x)

    -Shadow
    ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
    -This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-
     
  5. RevolvingElk said:

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    As the others have said, very beautiful and sad lyrics

    great job =)