All Night Long(Miss Me) Cover.

Baby, I'm going in like surgery
Then coming out again
I like to play the lotto
For the chance that I can scratch and win
Got a cocky attitude, living in the high life
Blaze the kush and crush the ice
cuz tonight is like this every night
I will have a hotter wife
my ***** cold like a skipole
kick it like a football
between her legs, like a fieldgoal
so much money its like i won the lotto twice
when i want something, i just buy it and say **** the price
(Yo, you gonna kill em right?)
Yeah, I make em run
skyrocket to the charts all the way until im number one
i always live life, cuz i make sure everyday is fun
my flow is never ending, homie, cuz it has just begun
Yeah, I'm in the state where there's liberty
Don't you **** with me or else I'll give you misery
Sting hard like a killer bee
My flow so magic baby call it wizardry
I always work hard, to make another hit
Every single party I attend they want me to spit
And I'm the kind of person, to never judge
I'm all about respect and I never even hold a grudge
That's why I'm at the top, homie can you keep up?
When it comes to competition, I always stay one up
Money flying everywhere, so go big or go home
I love to kick it with the guys because we always chrome
Yeah, and I always gotta thank my fans
So if you at my show, people let me see your hands
I always show respect to all the women that I love
I always stay catching flows, open with my baseball glove
Oh yeah, I love the glow from the limelight
Shining high up in the sky
bringing you that starlight
My life is on tape cuz the cameras always rolling
So come and get a hit off these trees that we blowing
Cuz it's on, you should be like me
I dedicate my time cuz this is where i wanna be
I go all night long
This could last a day or two
I need to relieve some stress
so come and help me kill this brew
I go all night long
This could last a day or two
I'm just gonna live my life
And see through my point of view


(This is the part I would like some advice on and possibly change it.)
Yeah, I'm in the state where there's liberty
Don't you **** with me or else I'll give you misery
Sting hard like a killer bee
My flow so magic baby call it wizardry
I always work hard, to make another hit




I'd love to thank you for the support that is constantly given and I love you guys and always will until the ****ing end!

Could I please have some feedback?

Hey man its ok not bad. Content is abit repetitive and not really my style of rapping but had a good flow to it and rhymed well too. Erm Im not sure how I can help but maybe a more innovative metaphor might create a better impact than "Sting hard like a killer bee"

Originally Posted by jaskailey88

Hey man its ok not bad. Content is abit repetitive and not really my style of rapping but had a good flow to it and rhymed well too. Erm Im not sure how I can help but maybe a more innovative metaphor might create a better impact than "Sting hard like a killer bee"

If you have ever heard the song then you know that Drake is repetitive in the song. I agree on what you said about the killer bee.

Yea thats why it seemed pretty familiar. I've actually revised my opinion now. It seems like you have just copied alot of drake's lyrics and twerked with a few words especially up to (Yo, you gonna kill em right?) A good idea woulda been to come up with different lyrics on the same beat rather than just recycle half of drake's lyrics and pass it off as a cover.

Originally Posted by jaskailey88

Yea thats why it seemed pretty familiar. I've actually revised my opinion now. It seems like you have just copied alot of drake's lyrics and twerked with a few words especially up to (Yo, you gonna kill em right?) A good idea woulda been to come up with different lyrics on the same beat rather than just recycle half of drake's lyrics and pass it off as a cover.

If you look at his lyrics and look at mine, you will change your opinion again because mine are a lot different.