another r&b song

Thought I'd experiment so came up with a mini R&b type song. Let me know what you think

Verse 1:

When I'd take you out
Did you mistake it for trash
You took off so suddenly
Yet I was the one who crashed

Never gave me a reason
Guess you urself never knew,
Left me in the red
Yet why am I feeling the blues

Chorus:
Desperately tryna get over the past,
Desperately hopin this pain dont last,
But I should be feeling glad
Cause your probably sufferin right now
The same way you made me

Verse 2:

U took it all you took it all,
The scent as well as the shoes,
All those moments we shared
So many photos of us two

Now Im tryna start again
Tryna get over the pain
Write a new page in my destiny
But you took the notepad too

Chorus:

Desperately tryna get over the past,
Desperately hopin this pain dont last,
But I should be feeling glad
Cause your probably sufferin right now
The same way you made me

Any feedback will be appreciated thanks Just want to see how I fared trying a different style