I'd Like To Spend Some More Time

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    [I miss you. I miss you. I miss you.. I miss you..]
    [intro]
    Dear my old friend,
    What blissful holidays.
    The only times when we we arrived.
    we wouldn't care what anyone would say.

    Cuz we had but each other.

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    Cold nights, I'd snuggle right beside you.
    No lights. I think I might fall asleeeeep...
    I wouldn't dare, to sink into nightmares.
    You are still my best friend.

    All alone, nothing quite to do.
    But stay home, stare out in the rain.

    Sorry but, we have not much of luck.
    Guess we're gonna have to stay.
    April what's the deal? May still is quite sealed.
    likely to catch a cold now...

    Frankly I, seem satisfied.
    Though I still cant see you..
    As well...

    [chorus]
    I'd like to spend some more time,
    Staring into your eyes.
    To think I spent my whole life around you.
    To think of our lil lies.
    id like to spend some more time,
    Saying I Love You.
    Cause who knows tomorrow you just might go.
    Who ever knew?
    [chorus End]

    -----------------------
    Scarlet cities,
    What daydreams I might have?
    To see you cry? To hear your funny laugh?
    [a feel] To give me a hug now?

    Dear Regret,
    What can I clearly say?
    Has my friend gone away?
    Or locked away he will stay?
    Cause this isn't like him!

    Dear Regret,
    I wanted him for so long,
    My secret,
    Stays locked inside my heart.
    I seem dead, so greatly mislead,
    What are you waiting for?


    [chorus]
    I'd like to spend some more time,
    Staring into your eyes.
    To think I spent my whole life around you.
    To think of our lil lies.
    id like to spend some more time,
    Saying I Love You.
    Cause who knows tomorrow you just might go.
    Who ever knew?
    [chorus end]

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    Who'd ever believe
    That I'd ever receive such a
    Person like you?
    Then somebody totally new?

    Who'd ever think twice?
    That you'd be so nice,
    To someone like me?
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    [soft sad voice]
    Id like to spend some more time,
    Being around you.
    You sent everyone a picture of you,
    Yes I was in it too..
    Id like to spend some more time,
    Being who we used to be.
    Cause, after all you might not be here tomorrow.
    Can't you stay with me?


    [upbeat chorus]
    I'd like to spend some more time,
    Staring into your eyes.
    To think I spent my whole life around you.
    To think of our lil lies.
    id like to spend some more time,
    Saying I Love You.
    Cause who knows tomorrow you just might go.
    Who ever knew?
    [Chorus end]

    [ending]
    Dear My old friend,
    The past feels somewhat new,
    Every time I touch you.
    The feeling strikes me too.

    Cause you know we have each other..,

    --------------------

    Love you Izrael, even though you will never read this.
    I just wanted to say..
    I miss those days, every time I see you I know you miss them too.
    Our little childish lies remind me of being happy.
    Our staring contests were always fun, I miss snuggling by you and falling asleep by your side watching Haunting Shows... Walking in our grandma's house on holidays, we wouldn't care what the grownups would talk about, cause we had each other.

    We'd play in the rain, and talk for hours. But not one time did I recall saying I Love You ever.
    I regret that cause now I feel that you don't care..

    I just wish that you could understand that I love you more than my own life and your the only person that has ever accepted me as myself.
    No one could understand me like you do, I just wish I could have another day with just you and me playing again..

    And everytime you've ever hugged me, past, present, future.. I cherish those moments cause those days will never come back...

    -Shadow
    Last edited by ShadowLeeSharp; 02-15-2011 at 03:37 AM.
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    I have a feeling.. That the lyrics "Id like to spend some more time" will do good for another song I might make lol
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    Lalalalalaaaaaaa, so bored... Need an idea,
    ......
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    How about you try and write something from another persons perspective? Or.....try and write a song about a person that doesn't exist, create a character in your head and put into words their character, mannerisms and persona. Try and think of a situation they could be in and write about that.....should keep you busy
     
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    That's an awesome ideaaaaaaaa, tonight I feast during brainstorming hour.
    Thanks Expii for helping xP
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    BAck to the lyrics,

    I like it as a whole - struggling to understand this line though

    You are but a best friend. suggests that all the person is is a best friend, surely thats enough to be for anyone?


    I'd like to spend some more time,
    Staring into your eyes.
    To think I spent my whole life around you.
    To think of our lil lies.


    Nice flow, sounds like your remembering fondly the lies, would they be fondly remembered or frowned at?

    Overall though, better than some I've read on here. Definitely getting better shadow
     
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    Hopefully once I'm sixteen I'll be even better xO !!!

    I detected this song to a cousin,
    They'd fondly be remembered, though also frowned at due to the fact that those days will never come back.


    "Cause who knows tomorrow you just might go"
    I barley have time to see the person, our time is always limited.
    So all what's left is memories.

    I believe this song, and my song "3 Colors" are the two songs I put my heart into.
    , x)
    BTW the lines, I really don't know, they help me with the instrumental parts
    ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
    -This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-
     
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    Just needed to fix a couple of parts, that's all...
    Including the end paragraph.

    Hope you like guys.
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    -This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-
     
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    Yep I like it a whole lot mai Spuddy-Buddy .. great work as always. You have a real gift-plus-heart for writing and I never get enough of reading you.
    There is no glamour in sudden death, and nobody ever wins a war.
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    Awh, thank yew Mooooooooooon xD
    I've always had a thing for music, mum said she recorded so many vids of me when I was like 4 and I was free Stylin and singing a song at the top of my head lmao.

    Thanks moon it means a lot YahKnoWhatIMean? Haha
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    -This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-
     
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    Yep IKnowEggzacklyWhatYouMean and you're most welcome. And 4 years old is the perfect time to wheel on freestyling I think. I really can't remember what that was like, but I'm sure it must've been great!
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    O'ReallehRealleh???
    Music is my life, if mum ever grounds me she can take everythingawayfrom me.
    Just leave my iPod and I'll be fine listening to my music in bed all daylong,

    Then I can dance just a little bit, Have you ever seen the movie Napoleon Dynomite by any chance? Lol?
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    -This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-
     
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    Hmmm the name is very familiar, maybe I've seen it??? Who was in it?
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    Dammot I forgot his name...
    He was in the movie Blades of Glory with Will Farrell lol
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    -This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-
     
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    Ok I'll google-wiki it, that should get me there .....
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    Nope, didn't see that one. But a pet llama?? How cool! I gotta see it now.
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    Lmao!!!! Search Napoleon Dynomite Ending Dance. That's the dance me and my old cousin used to do back then.
    (same cousin in my lyrics)

    It was so funny cause we got the moves down perfectly.
    We just didn't have enough space so we continuously slapped each other haha.
    And yeah, the llama, her name is tina haha
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    -This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-
     
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    Oooh ok that's why you asked about it ........ I know I'll think about exactly that when I see it ..... -hugs-
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    Awh that's okay, I sorta got used to being lonely. It's been 3 years, he's not gonna care much anymore.
    He still hugs me, though I feel no love like back then >.<

    If you really read em, he's basically in maybe all of my lyrics lol.
    ^^ *hugs bk tighterrrrrr!!!*
    ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
    -This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-
     
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    K I'll remember that for sure, and whenever I re-read any of your posts I'm sure it'll come to me then too. Btw I lost a best-friend-cousin at about age 12, so ........
    There is no glamour in sudden death, and nobody ever wins a war.
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