Title: MONSTER ARISE

is there something wrong?
can i just be myself?
why must everyone tare me down?
is there something wrong with me?
they scream, they beat
they make me bleed
No more!!!!

(chorus)
Let me die!
Let the monster ariiise!!
let it take me over
i shall fal into the abyss
let the monster ariiise
hidding in the dark
invading your dreams
causeing pain,fear and bloodshed
no longer will i be afraid
i want vengence
LET THE MONSTER ARIIISE!!!
(chorus end)

days and nights pass
it's always the same
everyone beating me down
smashing me down
pain and fear turn to hatred
hatred turns to a monster
scraching in my mind
wanting to break free
Takeing over my mind!

(chorusx2)

evreyone is too blame
all shall cower in fear
my anger and vengence
burn like a wildfire cunsuming the world
you think you know fear
wait till i find you
is there something wrong?
can i just be myself?

(chorusx3)

I totally got what you were trying to say Alex.
butttttttttttttt, I.. Like, couldn't find a flow for the song. Though lets push that aside cause I know hundreds of songs that do that and happen to be the best songs in the world.

Overall I like it Alex, good work. I felt what you were trying to say and totally got it.
keep up the awesome work bro


-Olivia