Title: still be friends

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  1. MR.Alexander said:

    Talking Title: still be friends

    I’M ON MY WAY HOME NOW
    AFTER SO LONG OF BEING GONE
    I WONDER WHAT WILL HAVE CHANGED
    WILL IT STILL BE THE SAME
    WILL I FIT IN OR BE AN OUTCAST
    I’M AFRAID!

    (CHORUS)
    WILL WE STILL BE FRIENDS
    AFTER SO LONG OF BEING APAPRT
    WILL YOU RECONGIZE ME
    WILL YOU EVEN REMEMBER ME
    WILL I RECONGIZE YOU
    WILL WE STILL BE FRIENDS
    I DON’T KNOW IF YOU WILL BE THE SAME
    WILL YOU STILL LIKE ME
    WILL YOU STILL BE MY FRIEND
    WHEN YOURE WITH YOUR NEW FRIENDS
    WILL WE STILL BE FRIENDS
    IM SO AFRAID YOU WILL THROW ME ASIDE
    WILL BE STILL BE FRIENDS
    (CHORUS END)

    We were the best of friends
    No one could get us apart
    We stayed up all night telling stories
    Always kept each other safe
    When you’d cry I’d wipe away your tears
    When you scream id chase away your fears
    Now I’m afraid

    (chorusx2)

    I don’t know if you’ll remember me
    I don’t know if you’ll even recognize me
    I’m so afraid being gone so long
    Will make me loose my best friend
    I don’t want to be alone without you
    We’ve been friends for so long
    I’d fall apart if our bond were to be cut now
    Now I wonder after so long

    (chorusx3)
     
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    PointZero said:

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    You're still using the "Chorus x 2, Chorus x 3" structure and it's making your songs very boring, no offense. There's a message in it, but the structure could make it stand out so much more.