Ocean Blue Eyes

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  1. Zer0's Avatar

    Zer0 said:

    Talking Ocean Blue Eyes

    Theres something different about this girl,
    I've never seen anything like it in my life,
    She's cute, smart, funny, and the great personality,
    But something else about this girl it's like I'm living a dream,
    When she looks at me it takes all my strength to turn away,
    Because what she's got could have me in a trance for days,

    It's those ocean blue eyes,
    You wouldn't believe the way they've got me hypnotized,
    Every time she blinks they sparkle like fireflies,
    No other girl could even try to compare,
    And every time you meet eye contact you can't help but stop and stare,

    You can search far and wide but you're never gonna see,
    A more perfect set of eyes that I've got in front of me,
    A color so amazing they'll have you left craving,
    Others just look black and white,
    When she's around it's just not right,
    Them other girls don't stand a chance,
    She'll have you hooked with just one glance,

    It's those ocean blue eyes,
    You wouldn't believe the way they've got me hypnotized,
    Every time she blinks they sparkle like fireflies,
    No other girl could even try to compare,
    And every time you meet eye contact you can't help but stop and stare,

    You won't believe,
    Until you see,
    But once you do,
    You'll be trapped too,

    It's those ocean blue eyes,
    You wouldn't believe the way they've got me hypnotized,
    Every time she blinks they sparkle like fireflies,
    No other girl could even try to compare,
    And every time you meet eye contact you can't help but stop and stare.
     
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    Katie13 said:

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    This is really nice - it's got a great flow to it. I love the story to it too! I'm hearing the Script singing, for some reason

    Just a note - in the last line, should it be 'make eye contact'?
    The timing's a bit odd though - would 'meet her eyes' work better?
    But what do I know?
     
  3. Zer0's Avatar

    Zer0 said:

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    Make, yes thank you haha. It should say make :P
    Thanks for readingand for the comment.
     
  4. RobberBaron said:

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    Ooh, good lyrics, and I like the rhyme scheme, great
     
  5. Zer0's Avatar

    Zer0 said:

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    Thanks youu