Deeper than any scar you can chase into your waning heart
Tracing each mistake before the pain comes alive
Behind the locked door a voice to stop calls out
Into the depths of regret, one truth is salvaged
Never to be proven or conveyed in simple words
When you feel there is no one left to say everything's alright
Run into the arms that waited for you so long
These scars have paid the price for each mistake
Lovelier than anything hoped to behold
Your heart becomes clear for a moment in those eyes
Past reminders fade away and no regret remembered
And in that moment...you allowed yourself a little smile
Even if you were the only one to save
Everything would be thrown away to bring you back
These scars have paid any price for each mistake
Deeper than any scar you can chase into your waning heart
Tracing each mistake before the pain comes alive
Behind the locked door a voice to stop calls out
-Joshua & Nanashi-
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Beautiful nanashi and Joshua !I love this!
When you feel there is no one left to say everything's alright
Run into the arms that waited for you so long
These scars have paid the price for each mistake
That bit meant ALOT to me <3 marvelous nanashi and Josh!!ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
-This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly- -
I am happy it spoke to you and had meaning to you, Olivia. That is most important to us. Thank you!
-Nanashi-
You're very welcome! What was wanted to be conveyed was meant to be clear for this one. Glad you liked it.
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Hey Nanashi and Joshua, nice work on this. And it was a very welcome read, because I haven't read much from you lately. I hope all is well
There is no glamour in sudden death, and nobody ever wins a war.
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Rockers Unite! => ROCK 'n' Roll Halls of Fame -
Sadly, I cannot say things are well. Not entirely. Along with my own problem I am dealing with, Joshua is trying to keep his relationship going after he *ate a muffin*
-Nanashi-Last edited by Nanashi; 03-17-2011 at 04:46 PM. Reason: Because Nanashi has a big mouth!
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Joshua, you little muffin eater! XD
Back on topic:
"Deeper than any scar you can chase into your waning heart
Tracing each mistake before the pain comes alive
Behind the locked door a voice to stop calls out"
Love these lines, good use of repetition. I was saying these words in my head as I typed them and completely forgot how to say repetition...
(I think the word you're looking for is: anyway...)
