Words Are Never Enough (please read!)

Gone like the leaves on the trees
I wish that time would freeze
I know things are getting rough
Words are never enough

I can't describe it
And I just can't deny it

This lifetime feels like forever
And it doesn't feel like it'll get any better
All I can do is waste my time
Sit around and wish that you were mine
(Words are never enough)

I try to get up off my knees
Will you help me please?
You can see right through my bluff
My lies just aren't enough

I can't describe it
And I just can't hide it

This lifetime feels like forever
And it doesn't feel like it'll get any better
All I can do is waste my time
Sit around and wish that you were mine
(Words are never enough)

I can't deny it
I can't hide it
Living inside my personal hell
I just can't see this ending well

This lifetime feels like forever
And it doesn't feel like it'll get any better
All I can do is waste my time
Sit around and wish that you were mine
(Words are never enough)

My words, my lies
Just aren't enough

Nice lyrics.
I´m not quite sure about this line "And it doesn't feel like it'll get any better" it seems to me out of tune.

I feel like desperation and wistfulness really comes through in this. It sounds like it would be a greatsong to do with just piano or as an acoustic to begin with the kick in with the percussion partway through and then back again at the end - obviously I don't know the tune but it feels like one of those songs.

Though I agree with Hugo Zhor - would it doesn't feel like it's going to get better work better?

Yeah, I see where that "out of tune" feeling is coming from. It works better when it's actually being sung. haha.

thank you both for the input!

Nice job but like the others i think that line seems like out of tune but other than that its fine

Nice job indeed!! It resembles to Skillet's style.. I really like it

thank you :3