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  1. Mon said: 03-25-2011 04:14 PM

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  2. RobberBaron said: 03-26-2011 03:08 AM

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    I really like this, and I love the ending lines "I’m tearing the stitches
    I’m digging the ditches
    I wanna see the bruises."

  3.  Mon said: 03-26-2011 12:43 PM

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    Well since you liked i think its not as bad as i thought it was actually i never thought it was bad but its quite different from what i usually write so i wasn't sure.

  4. RobberBaron said: 03-26-2011 12:50 PM

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    No, I don't think it's bad, I really like it