Blood On Innocence (Not "Polished")

Tell me,*
Am I worth this?
Am, I worth this?

Answer me.
Am I worthless?
Am, I worthless?
Well,
Honestly.
Am I worth this?
Are you this heartless?..
Hm...

Crying in darkness,
My hearts a complete mess.
What am I to do?*
What can I do? You monster!
Crying your unfaithful name.
But the quiet just stays the same.
What can I do?
What am I to do? You monster!

Reeeeeeeeeeaping knives against soft skin,
Against soft skin.
Pondering questions.
Of your existence.
Bloooooood on innocence, on innocence.
I cry. Blood on innocence, blood on innocence. I cry.
You monster I despise.

Tell me now,
Am I worth this?
Am, I worth this?

Answer me.
Am I worthless?
Am, I worthless to you?
Well,
Honestly.
Am I worth love? Am I worth saving?
Are you this heartless?..
Hm...
You monster.

Reeeeeeeeeeaping knives against soft skin,
Against soft skin.
Pondering questions.
Of your existence.
Bloooooood on innocence, on innocence.
I cry. Blood on innocence, blood on innocence. I cry.
You monster I despise.
Blood on innocence.

Who were you to lure me into the darkness?
It's like.
Blood on innocence. Like Blood on Innocence.
Who were you to touch me you sick monster,
It's like blood on innocence.
blood, on innocence.
And WHO were YOU, to make me smile then tare my whole world apart.
I loved this monster right from the start.
Then you eat my heart. You eat my heart.
You monster.



Tell me now,
Am I worth this?

Answer me.
Am, I worthless to you?
Well,
Honestly.
Am I worth love?
Well your not worthy of my bed......
Hm...
You monster.

Ooh, I like this. The opening works well, with the questions and slight alterations: "Am I worth this? - Am I worthless?". Blood on innocence, great theme. And hey, you wrote a song about a monster XD

Haha I told you that you were giving me ideas xD ! Lol when you went offline I had barley posted the song n I had barley written it thanxxx haha
I really like how it all came to me, it's really helping me climb back up not writing. Yay me thanx again robber yur a lifesaver

Eeek, love it, love it!!! :P
Sad and distressed and creepy, with a sadistic streak and just a hint of insanity... just the way I like it!!
Love your stuff!!!

wow thanks Katie I appreciate it, yay finally working my way back up in the Lyrics Review Forum hopefully I can keep the General Discussion Forum right too.........


Anyways thanxx guys!!