01. Childhood in Innocence - BEHIND THE WALL OF FREEDOM

I was born in this country
Raised in blocks of concrete
Spent days outside with my
Friends and lots of fun

No big problems at school
As I kept right their rules
Did my homework and then
Played games in the sun

Chorus 1:
Those were the days of my life
Blood in my veins boiling wild
Pain changing fast into smile
No doubt and fear in my mind

Lived every second at full
Everyday was something new
didn´t care for future
there was just here and now

Learnt to know what is right
Without wondering why
Took everything as it was
Natural somehow

Chorus 2:
Those were the days of my life
Blood in my veins boiling wild
Pain changing fast into smile
No doubt and fear in my mind
For everything there was a sense
In my childhood in innocence

Chorus 2:
Those were the days of my life
Blood in my veins boiling wild
Pain changing fast into smile
No doubt and fear in my mind
For everything there was a sense
In my childhood in innocence

In my childhood…in innocence… in innocence…in…innocence!!!

Ooh, great ideas in there
This bit is my favourite, it completely captures what you experience: "Learnt to know what is right
Without wondering why
Took everything as it was
Natural somehow"

A couple of things about grammer: "Friends and lots of fun", if you were talking about what you have done, you would say you had lots of fun, like: "Friends and had lots of fun". The word "work" is already plural, so no need to add an s: "Did my homeworks and then" should be "Did my homework and then".

Anyway great work

Like this. These - "Blood in my veins boiling wild" and "Raised in blocks of concrete" - bring to mind the phrase 'concrete jungle'
It's brilliant. Great representation of childhood, methinks

Originally Posted by RobberBaron

Ooh, great ideas in there
This bit is my favourite, it completely captures what you experience: "Learnt to know what is right
Without wondering why
Took everything as it was
Natural somehow"

A couple of things about grammer: "Friends and lots of fun", if you were talking about what you have done, you would say you had lots of fun, like: "Friends and had lots of fun". The word "work" is already plural, so no need to add an s: "Did my homeworks and then" should be "Did my homework and then".

Anyway great work

Thank you RobberBaron for your grammer advices. About "homeworks" I fixed it.
About "had lots of fun" I mean it "Spent days with my friends and spent with lots of fun".
So I think it could be right, but of course english isn´t my native:-)

Originally Posted by Katie13

Like this. These - "Blood in my veins boiling wild" and "Raised in blocks of concrete" - bring to mind the phrase 'concrete jungle'
It's brilliant. Great representation of childhood, methinks

Thank you Katie13.
Anyway where can I get smiley here I can´t find it here, so I write :-)
Thanks

I'm not so sure about "spent with lots of fun", what is it you're trying to say?

Originally Posted by RobberBaron

I'm not so sure about "spent with lots of fun", what is it you're trying to say?

When I wrote it I thought "Spent days outside with my friends and with lots of fun" or it could be "spent in lots of fun"
"friends and had lots of fun" doesn´t quite fit to flow.

Originally Posted by Hugo Zhor

Thank you Katie13.
Anyway where can I get smiley here I can´t find it here, so I write :-)
Thanks

There r lots of smileys in this forum but my favorites are ": D" witch turn into when you don't have that space. And :yaho o_fun: witch turn into this without the space between the O.
Or you could click "Go Advanced" Button right near the Post Quick Reply Button. There's the whole pack of them if you need them haahah n also you could click the MORE button and more smileys appear hope it helped Hun

Now! Let me post a new post to see what I thought about your awesome lil song here ^^

This totally catches the moment of being a young child living his life,

Pain changing fast into smile
No doubt and fear in my mind

Lived every second at full
Everyday was something new
didn´t care for future
there was just here and now

That seems to remind me of my younger brother who is, a young 6 year old boy. Lol, nice ideas Shadow really likes it!

Originally Posted by ShadowLeeSharp

There r lots of smileys in this forum but my favorites are ": D" witch turn into when you don't have that space. And :yaho o_fun: witch turn into this without the space between the O.
Or you could click "Go Advanced" Button right near the Post Quick Reply Button. There's the whole pack of them if you need them haahah n also you could click the MORE button and more smileys appear hope it helped Hun

Now! Let me post a new post to see what I thought about your awesome lil song here ^^

Thank you very much ShadowLeeSharp for smileys advices

Originally Posted by ShadowLeeSharp

This totally catches the moment of being a young child living his life,

Pain changing fast into smile
No doubt and fear in my mind

Lived every second at full
Everyday was something new
didn´t care for future
there was just here and now

That seems to remind me of my younger brother who is, a young 6 year old boy. Lol, nice ideas Shadow really likes it!

Thank you. I´m glad you like it. (Now I will use this smiley everywhere )
You´re right younger children are the best reflection to us to remember careless young living which we leave along our way of life.