Burning Halo... or something... can't think... help please!!!

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    Katie13 said:

    Post Burning Halo... or something... can't think... help please!!!

    Struggling for a really good title... any ideas?

    Damn you, boy, what were you thinking?
    Tried to steer alone and now this ship is sinking,
    Into the Depths of Pure Disaster, I see the Devil winking,
    His red eyes, I’m paralysed, and I’m no longer blinking,

    You strayed from the path and I followed,
    Now there’s no today, never mind tomorrow,

    Dancing on the edge of earth,
    Flying flames and dying worth,
    Couldn’t even think to say,
    Maybe we’ve come the wrong way,
    Because then is now, and now is when,
    The demons come for us again,
    Lie with you upon your pyre,
    And throw my halo to the fire,

    Sticks, stones and holy grails, we’re on our way somewhere,
    Fallen angels at our feet but we no longer care,
    This road leads to the gates of Hell, and no, we’re not prepared,
    You red eyes, I’m hypnotised, you can take me to your lair,

    You took my innocence and took my hand,
    I followed without question into that dreaded land,

    Dancing on the edge of earth,
    Flying flames and dying worth,
    Couldn’t even think to say,
    Maybe we’ve come the wrong way,
    Because then is now, and now is when,
    The demons come for us again,
    Lie with you upon your pyre,
    And throw my halo to the fire,

    I fell so sweetly into Hell,
    It’s hard to even tell,
    Whether you were wrong, or was I right?
    They’ll know that I’m with you tonight,
    Playing music from fiery staves,
    So lay me down upon your grave,

    Dancing on the edge of earth,
    Flying flames and dying worth,
    Couldn’t even think to say,
    Maybe we’ve come the wrong way,
    Because then is now, and now is when,
    The demons come for us again,
    Lie with you upon your pyre,
    And throw my halo to the fire,
    Last edited by Katie13; 04-19-2011 at 04:37 AM.
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    No ideas? Damn :/
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    Katie this is just brilliant verse, so many great lines in this I can't even pick favorites, or there would be so many it would just clutter things up lol

    Title: The best I can think of is Flaming Halos, or Haloes ... the tricks of the English language are getting in the way here, Iwonder which spelling "looks" better? If that even sounds good at all, I dunno .....
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  4. RobberBaron said:

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    Amazing! First verse is like "bam". Well done Burning Halo sounds cool, but you could use a phrase actually from the song: "Halo To The Fire", "Dancing On The Edge Of The Earth", "Dying Worth" or even something like "The Devil's Halo".
     
  5. Psychotic Wooden Fist said:

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    That's pretty cool. I could see that fitting into something like a metal song really well.

    I'd simply call it "Halo to The Fire" i think.
     
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    Haha, thanks, guys This is pretty different to my usual stuff but I think it's alreet
    It seems like "Halo To The Fires" winning at the mo... :P Thanks!!
    "If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."