Black Swan-inspired lyrics

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    Guilha said:

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    Wrote these lyrics inspired in the movie "Black Swan" which I really liked and thought it'd give great lyrics.. It's more difficult for a person who has not seen the movie to understand them and I hope the people who did watch it feel the lyrics are true to it.... Tell me what you think



    "Expectations Are Grand; I Am Grander"

    Innocence is a cruel burden,
    For that's not the Human nature.
    That's not Nature at all.
    What does it take to be seen
    Innocence alone will not make you Queen?

    Get out from under your mother's wing
    And spread your own.
    You do not have to follow her failed path;
    Fight for your throne.

    In the end, the World is a play
    And we're all actors on a stage,
    But instinct will make the World...

    Pressure, pressure when you've to please hundreds.
    Under the spotlight it's all a great ballet,
    Behind the scenes, unseen,
    They cannot see the pain of a mental, young, uncertain decay.
    Feelings of a thousand ropes restraining your wings,
    Your inner dark wings,
    Your dark wings that you'll need to spread
    To impress the people who brought you expectations,
    Blood, sweat, tears and hallucinations.

    But how nobody told you
    Insecurity could give pleasure,
    By shapeshifting into someone who haunts you everyday.
    When you're empty of care
    A little sympathy makes you sway.

    Nothing is worse than seeing something that isn't.

    In the end, the World is a play
    And you want to make her PAY!

    Where did she GO?!
    You want to see her DIE!
    Oh, how you want to see her fall
    So you can spread feathers tall.

    Cruelty and awareness of our world is growing.
    Inside of you they're quickly growing.
    Oh yes, they are.
    Comfort to swim in the clouds of desire
    And no fear of a deadly void,
    Because what is there to fear
    When you've grown your own wings?
    Every swan has their fears
    But fear of flying is not one of those things.

    They're all clapping and cheering.
    They're all on their feet as you bleed.
    They're all standing how the Gentleman would expect.
    They're all on their feet because you're not Beth.
    They're all in awe because, yes, you were perfect.

    In the end, the World is a play
    And we're all actors on a stage,
    But instinct will make the World...

    In the end, the World is a play
    And we're all actors on a stage,
    But instinct will make the World your Lake.
     
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    Wow. O.O.... That was amazing. I have not yet seen Black Swan
    But by many many Trailers I can get a little of what it means. Very very nice!! like seriously, your writing is out of this world keep it up!
    I missed yah! <3 !
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    Lol, thank you .

    Yeah, it would've been better if you had watched it, but thanks for the feedback, really means
     
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    True to the film. Absolute genius. It works so well

    This:
    "In the end, the World is a play
    And we're all actors on a stage,
    But instinct will make the World your Lake.
    "
    Is brilliant.

    I love the film and I love the song Nicely done!
    "If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."
     
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    This is not just really good lyrics but it's also fascinating to read! Very nice Guilha, very nice indeed. Encore Encore lol
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    @ Katie13

    Thanks glad you liked that part. really wanted it to make an impact


    @ MoonRide42

    Oh thanks i'm really glad you enjoyed it


    you people make me feel proud . hope i can keep writing stuff that will satisfy your standards
     
  7. amycu said:

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    this is so good, really does fit with the film (which was also genius).

    i just tried writing a song for the first time, any feedback would be appreciated:
    http://www.allthelyrics.com/forum/ly...d-be-cool.html
     
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    Thanks Amy . Your lyrics are pretty good as well, I must say