Metal song I made let me know what you think

Song one called everything ends
Has everything came to the end*
The end humanity is among us
Everything we do has to end*
It time
It time to end it all

Everything we fight for*
Is everything we lost
Everything we are*
Is everything we hate
This is the time
This is the time for it all to end

We made the end come*
We are the solution*
we have to find away*
We have to find away
Or it will be ever.

We are the reason the future suffer*
We are the reason know body live
We are the people you hate*
The people that will end it all

No body listens
Know body cares*
As a cry of Justus come*
It will be too late

We made the end come*
We are the solution*
We have to find away*
We have to find away
Or it will be the end
*
We made the end come
We are the solution
We have to find away
We have to find away
Away
Away

It's too late
time is up!!!*



Song two despise

Ughhhhhhh!

Darkness is all you are
I can see it in you
I don't want to be anything like you
I'm nothing like you

I'll be what you never where*
What you never see
The disease you ****in became,
The disease that you are,
Has ended everything!,*

Hate what you are*
Hate everything about*
You!!

Something I ****ing hate!
Something I despise!
Is in you,
Is you*
Is you

Ughhhh*
Yaaaaa

You where everything*
Now look what you where*
And look what you are
You are the disease*
That has ****ing ended everything
Nothing you can do will make a change*

Hate what you are
Hate everything about*
You!

Something I ****ing hate*
Something I despise
Is in you,
Is you*
Is you
*
Something I ****ing hate
Something I despise*
Is in you
Is you
Is you

You where everything*
Everything
Everything*



Song three

You knew it was coming to an end*
But you refuse to let yourself take It in
Everything you had,*
Is everything you want

Now isn't it all you want*
To change but you never see*
Anything come back in your own pathetic way
It will never be the same

You knew,*but you'll never change
something inside*
You knew, but you'll never change*
Something inside you
Something inside hates!!
Hates!!

You'll never change*
You'll never change

You have lost the will to change*
*see everything you wear*
Now look at what you become
Look at what you ****ing become
Is this what you want!!*
Is this what you want!!

You knew, but you'll never Change
Something inside
You knew, but you'll never change
Something inside hates!!
Hates!!

You knew! But you'll never change
Something inside
You knew! But you'll ever change
Something inside hates!!
Hates!!
Hates!!*
Hates!!

You'll never change!!

Tune drop b
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It's great, I really love those lyrics Keep it up.

Thanks