I don't really have a title yet.

I don't really have a title yet.
so you reside in your room
hiding from impending doom
clouded in a sick perfume
hiding from the truth
sneaking and sniffing like a coon
waste time watching cartoons
as not to shoot through the roof
or get trampled under the hooves
of the raging masses of pawns
since this could be the last dawn
so don't cry when you are gone
at least you know its gonna come

which is quite a luxury
call it your destiny, spending it in custody
as good as it must be
you'd rather hug trees
seriously man, geez
you now know when you'll die
so don't dare just sit and cry
go out and try to fly
cuz even when the end is nigh
we all walk the thin line
it's easy for me to say
since im high and im dry
got an unknown number of days

to do whatever i want
whenever i want
however i want
sorry im this blunt
with this agonizing rant
im just fantasizing, rhymin, let me chime in
with some sloppy concepts
name it, nope, already done n dropped that
scrap it, ive already said that
thank you for the friendly chat
did it all because i can
freedom of speech be damned
some are too retarded man
don't deserve their basic rights

if you just use it
to protalk bout white guys
less brains than ****
when you call our brothers ****
don't deem yourself better
just as you see fit
the kind of person i dread
have you ever felt this way
or are you stupid to this day
hiding in your room, glued to your tv
why look around, there is nothing to see

it makes me wanna scream
is this just a fever dream
after all this civilisation
we still aint one big nation
every war is still a theft
think of that when you scream and you dream
about war, leaving scars
why are we so proud of it
it means nothing, **** it
so what if we can kill other countries
or are mighty enough to burn down trees
i beg you on my hands and knees
even though i pay my taxation fees
doesnt mean i blindly agree
im just good at hiding dirty deeds

Band together and plant the seeds
cuz now the needs of the few outweigh the needs of the many
while we rabble on forever, we got more children to bury
isnt it sad, while we sit getting fat, another right
multiple words exist, just look outside
some people actually have a fight
so they can hope to reach the night
a lack of vitamines ****s up their sight
and we whine about our human rights
it disgusts me, it must be fake, trust me, take my words

With all our modern hurt
the whole world has become absurd
ignore me tho, im just a nerd
laugh with me, its ridicilous
come and go, chill with us
do nothing and nothing till we drop the fuzz
watch it though, its still hot
but the buzz is all we got
thats right, we got squat
but at least we can live decently
im just spitting, im hitting this mic
till you believe me
only that could relieve me
from feeling guilty for owning a love, a house, a life
and still whining about strife

The story isn't about me
im just the one who tells it
forget me like you shouldve done
the moment that i dropped this
and think about our slaves
get out of our caves
see the clear blue sky
and reach for it before you die
break free from the lies
break free from the flies
And dont blindly follow other guys

Any feedback would be appreciated. Please point out mistakes if you find them

Come on guys. I'd rather have you burn all of it down, then not get any feedback at all!