Queen of Roses

Hey so, I'm kinda new to this but have been writing forever..I just wanna know if my stuff is any good. Thanks.


Maybe no one well ever tame me
They sure as hell aren't gonna save me
And I don't want them to
This is something I must do

I'll stay in my place on top of this throne
and You stay in yours indirectly below
Not an my feet, no get off your knees
But somehwere below in the midst of the city

I overlook with my unwavering stare
The queen of heart break
The one who can't care

And you stay below lonely but free
Sending me flowers for your misery
One for each day, one for each sin
The 7 deadly ones that peel at your skin

I cursed them to you and made a stain on your mind
So these flowers keep coming time after time
Still I just turn my head and pretend not to see
The crowd of roses lying dead at my feet

Well aside from the fact that this describes half of why the world is so screwed up and getting more screwed up every day (sorry but this touches a very raw nerve) the poetry is good, well-written.