Death Becomes Her

All at once it was released
My feelings for you are now deceased
There's no sense of life
Not even a twitch
I kicked them out of my heart
and into a ditch

There they will stay
For the rest of my days
No burial
Just let them decay

Watch as the passion turns into black
From the good feeligns that I now lack
They were too good for you
So you sucked out the color
The burning red love
is now cold and pallor

The breath in my lungs
That I'd held for you
Has been beat from my chest
In a foul mess of blue

The warmth in my body
is now non-existant
For you bled me dry
and I held no resistance

Now just as you wish
Those feelings are dead
Nothing left in my heart
No soul to be fed

Wow. Amazing !
Great concept.
Awesome flow it seems so effortless out of you. Like you can write such good songs like these without your brain even breaking a sweat!


Watch as the passion turns into black
From the good feeligns that I now lack
They were too good for you

OR

All at once it was released
My feelings for you are now deceased
There's no sense of life
Not even a twitch
I kicked them out of my heart
and into a ditch

Marvelous. I love your writing already.

Thanks! That means a lot to me. I've been writing forever but was soo apprehensive about posting them for others to see :x

It's okay!! people here always LOVE to read lyrics. Especially like, very very very good ones like these.
Keep writing!!!

*tear* speechless.