New rap/song!! check it out!!

Finally had sometime away from finals and get this flow out. im not done with the full song but i will be soon!

You got it plus you know youre fine
does he do it all, does he blow ur mind?
give me a chance, a chance to accomplish this feat
one more time girl just to sweep you off your feet
now be mine, be my special treat
no abstract thinkin, time to keep it concrete
youre my cup of coffee cus now i cant sleep
now im fallin down, and im fallin pretty deep
stick with me, i ll make you all you can be
i can see it perfectly, like we have it all in HD,
Im not lost but i admit im feelin stray
come on girl just a few, i kno you wanna stay
stand next to me, let me show you my way
your my last girl if i had our final say,
i hope you brand my name before all the girls do
my songs are about you and the rest dont have a clue
now lets be together cus we're way past due
and im not false cus i always keep it true

Chrous
We have something special that select have, thats a few
me and you do it all, we can chill while we share a brew
i had girls before but they dont compare to you
lets be together cus we re way past due

Copyright 05/18/2011


Let me kno what you think of it so far

Look at my "Way Past Due" fulll song i posted May 24 for the whole song!

I'll like the message behing it. it is a beautiful song. writen pretty well. I also noticed you stamped a copyright on there. good job!!! Thats the first first time anyone other than me has done that at lease thats what i've seen. I guess the word got around. lol I'll check it out.

remember... a favor for a favor. I have some stuff in the rap lyric reviews thread.

Sk'nDeep. Out