Kemal Monteno Svoj Ti Zivot Poklanjam to english

can I get corrections please

Jos uvijek zivim u pjesmama,
jos uvijek u njima
mlad sam ja,
i dalje iskreno, naglas,
tebi pjevam voljena

Jos uvijek zivim i osjecam,
jos uvijek hocu da volim ja,
kao na dlanu u ovim pjesmama,
svoj ti zivot poklanjam

Ref.
Bez tebe nisam to sto sam,
samo tebi, najdraza, svoju ljubav dugujem,
ne znam ja da trgujem,
sav zivot koji
s tobom dijelim sad,
tebi poklanjam, voljena.

Jos uvijek zivim i osjecam,
jos uvijek hocu da volim ja,
kao na dlanu u ovim pjesmama,
svoj ti zivot poklanjam

Ref.

Jos uvijek zivim u pjesmama,
jos uvijek u njima
mlad sam ja,
i dalje iskreno, naglas,
tebi pjevam voljena, voljena


We still live in the songs,
still in them
I am young,
remain honest, loud,
you loved singing

We still live and feel,
still want to love me,
in plain view in these poems,
You give your life

Ref
Without you, I have not why I am
Only you, my dearest, I owe my love,
I do not know that traded
All life that
I share with you now,
give you, beloved.

We still live and feel,
still want to love me,
in plain view in these poems,
You give your life

Ref

We still live in the songs,
still in them
I am young,
remain honest, loud,
you sing loved, loved.

My take, in a hurry, would be:

I gift my life to you

I still live in songs,
in them I'm still
a young guy,
I still honestly, and loudly,
sing to you my love.

I still live and feel,
I still want to love,
like on an open palm in those songs,
I give you my live as a gift.

Ref.
Without you I'm not myself,
just to you, my dearest one, I owe my love,
I'm not a savvy trader,
all my life that
I now share with you
I give you as a gift, my loved one.

I still live and feel,
I still want to love,
like on an open palm in those songs,
I give you my live as a gift.

Ref.

I still live in songs,
in them I'm still
a young guy,
I still honestly, and loudly,
sing to you my love, my love.