A song I wrote for my wifeI call it Priceless (need feedback)

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    Default A song I wrote for my wifeI call it Priceless (need feedback)

    Priceless
    .

    V1
    There are so many women on earth but your the first.
    Woman to ever make me burst in to tears.
    Not because Iím hurt baby but from sheer cheer.
    I get excited at the site of you Even after 8 years.
    To me you're priceless ain't nothing worth the price of you.
    youíre the winning lotto ticket in my life despite who
    I've had in the past, I feel fortunate to have
    you in my life the others were nothing but some ***.
    they werenít even half, You're more than they ever was.
    you inspire me to fight for whats mine and what's right
    Iím the moth your the light shinning bright in the night
    it's like I fell in love with you at the first sight.
    I know we fight more than we care to but like air
    I couldn't survive with out you in my life.
    never would have thought Iíd be so lucky
    to be your hubby and have someone like you as my wife.

    Hook
    Youíre priceless....you make everything in life worth living for
    I adore you more than then one can ever endure
    you're priceless...you're like a drug that Iím addicted to
    curled up in a ball on the floor and all I can do is ask for more.
    I'd find Yamashita's Treasure 49 boxes of Gold
    and swim to Davy Jones locker and rip out his soul
    take all that he has and give it to you
    for you baby there no telling what I would do.
    Cause youíre priceless...

    V2
    Like Golem there's not a mountain I wouldn't climb,
    not a incline Iíd decline, my precious I've signed the dotted line.
    Now we're inseparable, Your spirit's too divine for spectacles.
    Bottom line your incredible to measures unmeasurable.
    your respectable, and how you turn me on it's electrical.
    Oh so sexual, Plug that in your open receptacle.
    Close your eyes open mind and picture the perfect woman.
    the spitting image of her is mine. Iím hooked and I can't stop looking.
    I'll never let you go my heart bleeds for you daily.
    Maybe it's me being insane baby but you dive me crazy like rabies.
    You see things like no one else can, your graceful as an eagle.
    The other birds are dirty seagulls, mediocre less than equal.
    Feeble minded insects feeding off of your intellect.
    Thatís why they're like Rodney Dangerfield they don't get respect.
    To me, Your the world and they are just a little spec
    Because you're priceless baby, what more from me would you expect.


    Hook
    You're priceless....you make everything in life worth living for
    I adore you more than then one can ever endure.
    you're priceless...your like a drug that Iím addicted to.
    Curled up in a ball on the floor and all I can do is ask for more.
    I'd find Yamashita's Treasure 49 boxes of Gold
    and swim to Davy Jones locker and rip out his soul.
    Take all that he has and give it to you
    for you baby there no telling what I would do.
    cause youíre Your priceless...


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    04/272011

    So what do you think?
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    Sk'nDeep
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    SK'nDeep said:

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    anyone eles have any feed back?
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    MiT said:

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    nice one again
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    Thanks again my friend...
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    Sk'nDeep
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    bumped
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