I have one verse started. needs a name. Please read.

I need a name for this song I'm Writing...
Please any Ideas..



Displayed in pages An age full of hatred crazes.
History at it's worst the rest is kept in sacred places.
From a time when murder was okay to commit.
Quick to slit your throat and burn you up in a pit.
Aheinous land based off of lies and genocide.
All alling apart in layers so why live with pride.
Women and children are in prayer struggling to get out alive.
Fears amplified ,hearing the battle going on out side.
Covered with flies,waiting for demises.
Inocent dead bodies slaughtered in the night.
multiple murders of the innocent sacrificed as martyrs.
Call it what you want to but these martyrs had sons and daughters.
Sold on the black market raised as slaves.
Chew on that for a second now think of today.
Life today ain't S*** compared to then.
You only exist because of the courage of them.

Copyright 05/27/11

Sk'nDeep

Suggestion for a title would be , The World's enigma or What it's come to. Great piece in general. Props from genocide/HgP

nice. I like it. thanks HGP

Anytime mayne.

SK'nDeep, this song deserves a good title. The title would be the hook. I can come up with longer ones; but that's not 'kosher,' now, is it? . . . (By the way, "What it comes to" is very good!!! so I just wanna offer something based on how the song hit me. Unlikely to surpass what's already been submitted!) . . . Going through my mind now is "Riding on Death," "Hisssstory," or "Wasted" (kind of a double or triple meaning on that one--as in killed, murdered, slaughtered; also, unappreciated & discarded like trash...)

nice ideas, thanks I will keep them all in mind. this one still needs some work so I will attepmt more verses and a B.A hook
thanks again for your time...

I suggest 'Slaves of today' ...

that sonds good to Molotova, I will have to take all of these and put them in a hat.
lol

I never understood why songs need titles anyway, the point is made clear by the lyrics ...

Great subject and a good flow by the way !

what about "living in hell" ?

Medieval Massacre. Haha Idk, but thats what I thought you were rapping about..

Hahaa stop smoking Tre.

Hahahah, yeeeaaaahhh, after I posted that, I read it again, and was like, "Oh, not what that was about. Ehh, whatever though." I must've skipped over a few lines at the end. Smh. Habitual Hell comes to mind now though, because I like alliterations. That is, if you were to make the rest of the song about the ignorance of people not acknowledging the past. The first verse would be about, what you already have, describing what people in the past went through, the second could be about how you despise people for not acknowledging the past and what bothers you most about it, and the last verse could be about how they can change and take pride in their heritage or at least acknowledge it.

Good Idea,,I like that..I will have to take some time to wright that..Thanks man...

What about... 21st Demise, or to make it more implicit I would suggest Blackjack Demise,

I like that one too...Wow too much at one time LOL You all have great ideas...I will have to carefully pick one of them...Thanks guys and girls...