Title: Forget Me (leave comments plz)

You see me during the day
I look like a piece of art everyday
Smiling when I’m told too
Laughing when everyone else laughs
You’ve fallen ever so hard in love with me

(Pre chorus)
To bad you’ve fallen for a lie
The truth shows itself when the sun goes down
This pretty, happy girl
Is a mask for the world to see

(Chorus)
When the sun goes down
The mask is removed
Exposing a girl so heavily scared
Forget me I’m now what you want
I’m just a girl that spends
Her days a lie, her nights wanting to die
Forget me I’m not what you want
You’ve fallen for a monster!
(Chorus end)

I wasn’t always like this you see
Wasn’t afraid to show my face
I used to laugh and smile all the time
No more now, never again
That girl is dead and gone now
Yet you still are in love with me
Would you love me still if you knew the truth?

(chorusx2)
When the sun goes down
The mask is removed
Exposing a girl so heavily scared
Forget me I’m now what you want
I’m just a girl that spends
Her days a lie, her nights wanting to die
Forget me I’m not what you want
You’ve fallen for a monster!
(Chorus end)



Even if you knew the truth
I couldn’t love you back
Last one I let in my heart
Scared my face beyond repair
Leaving me looking like a monster
Now I spend my night looking for a way to die
Writing on my arm, I want to die
How can you love me!

(chorusx3)
When the sun goes down
The mask is removed
Exposing a girl so heavily scared
Forget me I’m now what you want
I’m just a girl that spends
Her days a lie, her nights wanting to die
Forget me I’m not what you want
You’ve fallen for a monster!
(Chorus end)

Good expression Alex, good form, and I also peeked at 2-3 of your earlier posts. Just from that, I might say this is one of your best?

Except that I cringe at the theme ... Yin and Yang, and so forth ... everyone has a good side, and Everyone is a monster. Most of us just hide it or suppress it better than others.

Nice job

wooow, nice wirtting
i like it

First off, great lyrics, only criticism I have is: ok I read this three times, and it might just be me, but I really can't make this flow right, I tried to get a beat going to get it to flow, I don't see it flowing like a song should. could be just me though I bet if i heard it from your mouth it would flow. I might just have to many things on my mind at the moment making it tough. Good though.