Dreams (never satisfied)

Always when my dream comes true
Already have another one
A setting goal of something new
I have never done

Bridge:
First of all it seems
That all of my dreams
Are so far away

All I have to give
To make my dreams live
It is worth to pay

When resolution is made
I have to keep on holding tight
To my own goal not to fade
Fullfillment skyline

Bridge:
First of all it seems
That all of my dreams
Are so far away

All I have to give
To make my dreams live
It is worth to pay

Chorus:
Higher and higher
Through ice or through fire
To make my dreams come true

Straight ahead afore
Through heat or through the roar
To make my dreams come true

Don´t care for a discouraged voice
Of people living their grey lives
I feel this is the right choice
To know I´m alive

Bridge:
First of all it seems
That all of my dreams
Are so far away

All I have to give
To make my dreams live
It is worth to pay

Chorus 2:
Down below and deep
Running upright or creep
To make my dreams come alive

Not rot to the core
That´s always do I for
Never satisfied

I´m to be
´till the end of time
Never satisfied
I´m to be
´till eternity
Never satisfied

This is a inspiring piece of work. I like the never say die mentality. I did see some area's for improvment. a few lines here and there seemed to be missing words.
good start for what has potential to be a awsome song.

Ahoj Hugo. I think this seems to the smoothest lyrics of yours that I've read yet. And I'll give a hand on what Sk'nDeep mentioned, 2 or 3 things that could make this perfect in my opinion:

Straight ahead afore
Though heat or through the roar*
To make my dreams come true

Don´t care for a discouraged voice (or discouraging voice)
Of people living their grey lives
I feel this is the right choice
To know I´m alive

"I've to be" ..... do you mean the British way of contracting "I have"? ... in honesty I think it would sound in song if you say "I'm to be" or just say "I have to be" without making it a contraction.

This is great, would love to hear it set to music!

Originally Posted by SK'nDeep

This is a inspiring piece of work. I like the never say die mentality. I did see some area's for improvment. a few lines here and there seemed to be missing words.
good start for what has potential to be a awsome song.

Thank you for your comment.
About missing words, there is different melody so rhyming verses aren´t the same long.

Originally Posted by MoonRide42

Ahoj Hugo. I think this seems to the smoothest lyrics of yours that I've read yet. And I'll give a hand on what Sk'nDeep mentioned, 2 or 3 things that could make this perfect in my opinion:

Straight ahead afore
Though heat or through the roar*
To make my dreams come true

Don´t care for a discouraged voice (or discouraging voice)
Of people living their grey lives
I feel this is the right choice
To know I´m alive

"I've to be" ..... do you mean the British way of contracting "I have"? ... in honesty I think it would sound in song if you say "I'm to be" or just say "I have to be" without making it a contraction.

This is great, would love to hear it set to music!

Ahoj Moonride

thank you for your great suggestions and nice english lesson