In My World

Longing is the harshest feeling,
It leaves you empty inside,
Like the foolish king, we know it,
Unstoppable as the tide,

Me, I long for you to look back,
In my head, love, I’m yours,
Don’t you wonder about things I say?
When I forget to close those doors,

I’m trying to fix something unbroken,
Trying to take back words unspoken,

In my world, we’ve lived and laughed,
We whisper about things that never passed,
You give me your heart; I give you my all,
You’re there to catch me whenever I fall,
I lie in your arms as the sun rising high,
Till it wakes me, glistening on tears that I cry,

Oh, but you in my head are amazing,
You’re the one thing that’s mine,
The star that I wish on each evening,
You’re never afraid to shine,

You’re always there to hold me,
When you’re oh so far away,
When I lie in bed, I’m wishing,
Hoping that maybe one day,

I’m trying to fix something unbroken,
Trying to take back words unspoken,

In my world, we’ve lived and laughed,
We whisper about things that never passed,
You give me your heart; I give you my all,
You’re there to catch me whenever I fall,
I lie in your arms as the sun rising high,
Till it wakes me, glistening on tears that I cry,

I wish I could say all the things left unsaid,
But I don’t and they keep swirling round in my head,
I’m living in my head, the ice growing thin,
My heart breaks each day when reality kicks in,

In my world, we’ve lived and laughed,
We whisper about things that never passed,
You give me your heart; I give you my all,
You’re there to catch me whenever I fall,
I lie in your arms as the sun rising high,
Till it wakes me, glistening on tears that I cry,

From my world, I see you together,
And I draw back in for forever,

*tear* i think that about sums it up.
this is great.
i long for my girlfriend to love me like i love her.
this speaks to me in it own unique way telling a story of sorts.
its great

you actually inspired me to write. thank you so much you have no idea.
i havent been able to write anything in like a month.

Thanks I'm glad I could be of assistance.

Wow...Kate This is awsome!!!
Beautifully Expressed beyond words. Nice rhyme structure too...Good post, I right rap and this inspires me to finnish some work I still yet have not posted.
I completely Agree with Eams. It's a tear jerker...

Thanks, guys I'm just getting back in the swing of things and I had to try a few times to get this right.

I have always believed taking lots of time creates a mater piece.Those who talk about this only took me thirty minutes to right usualy does'nt hit it home...
Keep doing what your doing becuase it's working for you girl...

This is gorgeous! I don't know how I've survived without you!

This: "Longing is the harshest feeling,
It leaves you empty inside,
Like the foolish king, we know it,
Unstoppable as the tide"
So true!

"Me, I long for you to look back,
In my head, love, I’m yours,
Don’t you wonder about things I say?
When I forget to close those doors,"
For some reason "forget to close those doors" just really stuck out to me

"I’m trying to fix something unbroken,
Trying to take back words unspoken,"
That is just fantastically clever, and yet I seem to have this empathy with it!

"The star that I wish on each evening,
You’re never afraid to shine,"
Wonderful!

I'm going to stop now otherwise I'll end up pasting the whole song

Haha, I guess you just about survived :P Thanks, Robber