Hey everyone! this is my first post here and this is one of my favorite work, so I would really like you're critiques
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Copyright 7 MAY 2011
Cross your arms
And pray for my end
Keep playing the main role
When everyone is just a stage for you
I'll tear that dress
Nail the veil into your cheeks
So no one will notice your voice
Red, red roses falling down my arms
They leave scratches telling me you're a liar
Blue, blue ocean will be the victim
Of a desperate reason to be spoken
[Chorus 1]
You're not the only one who has my eyes glued on
You're not the only one who i could talked about
You're not the only one who has tasted my highest quality
While quantity will make you feel so sorry
Sorry for me!
I'm on a cemetery
While black is my suit you painted so deeply with your fingers
I know a liar when I see one
And you are the tasteless part of this world
Crimson make-up you wear too thick
Makes you forget that you're nothing but a loaded gun
Velvet walls you slept in
makes you forget what this song is about
[chorus 1]
You're a liar!
But this is not for you
Take it down a massive step
Burn that mouth of yours
If you think you could make it out with a single scream
And it's okay for me to judge you a liar
'Cause I am one
All I said was a lie
[Chorus 1]
And the truth is!
[Chorus 2]
You are the only one who has my eyes glued on
The only one who i could talked about
The only one who has tasted my highest quality
I hope quantity will make you feel so sorry
Tell me what you think about it