9-11 A song dedicated to our tragedy!! Feed back is needed please....

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    SK'nDeep said:

    Default 9-11 A song dedicated to our tragedy!! Feed back is needed please....

    This song is a bit long but, I feel as if the extra verse was necessary,for the tragedy we suffered over a decade ago...

    4 verses ,16 bars each
    2 bridges
    and 4 hooks...
    What do you think? Please let me know....

    V1
    I canít dry my eyes enough for the lives on 9-11.
    Times were rough, but we survived cause we strived together.
    Allot of lives have died. allot have cried. but in my eyes.
    Theyíre all alive high in heaven, providing us blessings
    still traumatized. Climbing what's left, pronounced as ground zero.
    in dept to others who scoured the ruble for our people.
    searching for the feeble crushed underneath mounds of material.
    By Heroes cut out from the inferior, so why do we still fear their exterior?
    But No tasteless discrimination took place on this day.
    Cause every race had on gray faces looking and thinking the same.
    itís amazing that we made it, A day with out alienation.
    Maybe we should all paint our faces gray and never bathe again.
    If thatís the only way to stop racism so be it.
    You donít have to be a genius to see it,only idiots cease to believe it.
    So if you. witnessed this trauma and never thought to cry.
    Your better off living as suicidal bombers on the demonic side.


    Hook
    X2
    Cause every year the fear revisits us in squeals,
    embedding the image of evil, scaring American people.
    Impairing American eagles, by clipping our wings.
    But don't think we'll never fly again we'll get through this thing.


    V2
    September eleventh will always be a day to remember,
    witnessing trade centers temper, blazing flames ,red and Grey embers.
    Families in panic preying friends & family members werenít injured.
    Brothers sisters Mrs.'s and Mr.'s and they're children dismembered.
    Crying as pain enters, every Thanks Giving and Christmas.
    Left empty with no family to thank for giving or open thier gift's with.
    Feeling like only way to forget it, is to get both of thier wrists slit.
    At the end of existence, Praying for the fathers forgiveness.
    But you can't give up that quick, you have a purpose in life,
    and that purpose is not to commit suicide because your hurting in side,
    turn the hurt into pride and purify your mind.
    In return the closed curtains for that person are certain to rise.
    I know you're fed up, but don't let it drowned you.
    keep you head above the vicious waves of doubt that pound you
    look around and see all of the beauty that surrounds you,
    and support our troops who contribute their life for the red white and blue.

    Bridge
    They take us for granted we listen but don't understand it.
    what there saying like there aliens from another planet.
    we should band it and demand them to speak what we speak.
    keep them in reach if you can't handle it just leave us in piece.



    Hook
    X2
    Cause every year the fear revisits us in squeals,
    embedding the image of evil, scaring American people.
    Impairing American eagles, by clipping our wings.
    But don't think we'll never fly again we'll get through this thing.
    .
    V3
    The police are usually expected to neglect and arrest you.
    Now the evidence is proof,I can finally respect you.
    Address you with a solute and hope this never happens again.
    I can't imaging the feeling of finding your best friend.
    That you use to work with, missing limbs or burnt to a crisp.
    Memories are meant to fade, but it always hurts to forget.
    Always talking in hallways about what purp did you get.
    Now talking to dirt, during work, like it's your only purpose to live.
    Used to refer them a pigs, but now big blue is the new term.
    Never would have thought I would have swerve this curb to hit this U turn,
    But you've earned every bit, every cent that I've spent,
    So I wish I could take back every hurtful word that I've spit.
    So thank you so much, for the loyalty you've obviously shown us,
    so from all of us, here are some coffee and donuts,
    you no long owe us, let just hope the rest will grow up,
    in hope's the love will hold up, Because it's the only thing going for us.

    Hook
    X2
    Cause every year the fear revisits us in squeals,
    embedding the image of evil, scaring American people,
    impairing American eagles by clipping our wings.
    But don't think we'll never fly again we'll get through this thing.


    V4
    My brains trapped in a relapse, replaying back the attack.
    I see plans crash in my dreams, there's no taking it back.
    so why sleep, I keep rolling over knowing the war ain't over,
    cause the immoral keep turning there little boys into soldiers.
    I with I could foil there plot, not for the oil they stock,
    But for the children that are poisoned and immorally taught.
    What for? Whats the reason for you to toy with the clock,
    getting a little boy shot on your own soil from holding a glock,
    Bin Laden been shot in the face, and we watched Saddam hang.
    But they're not the only ones to blame for this pain.
    We still have Alcida formulating, joining for crusade.
    all I can say is Ali made and omelet and must of dropped a few eggs.
    But there insane if they think there going to take us.
    Obama wasn't playing when he said America needs to wake up.
    They Phased us,when you thought of bombing our stocks.
    But they just set of the alarm clock, And we're sill carving their rocks.



    Bridge
    They take us for granted we listen but don't understand it.
    what there saying like there aliens from another planet.
    we should band it and demand them to speak what we speak.
    keep them in reach if you can't handle it just leave us in piece.



    Hook
    X2
    Cause every year the fear revisits us in squeals,
    embedding the image of evil, scaring American people.
    Impairing American eagles, by clipping our wings.
    But don't think we'll never fly again we'll get through this thing.




    Copyright 06/12/2011

    Thanks man...

    I try man...

    bumped

    Audio is coming...hopefully soon...
    Last edited by Mixalopoulos; 10-18-2011 at 07:19 AM.
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  2. failedson said:

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    this is nice, I like your idea

    "Maybe we should all paint our faces gray and never bathe again.
    If that’s the only way to stop racism so be it."

    And that would be my favorite part. Tired of racism.
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    I agree. That is why I am who I am. I grew up with it in my family and I would have to leave the room when I would here it. But still to this day I here it see it feel it. This drives me even harder to make the diffrence...Most of my songs talk about it some way or another.. Thats Why I'm Sk'nDeep
    Thanks For you post.... Failedson you forgot one thing... You forgot to click like lol----Newbe's.... J/K
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  4. failedson said:

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    I've already liked it lol
    Black is my suit you painted so deeply with your fingers.
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    Thanks...Dawg..
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  6. Jared Collins said:

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    hey SK'nDeep do you mind if me and my buddy collab to add this with some beats? you will be put as the lyrics but me and my buddy can make the beat
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    As long as you know it's copy rights are mine. sure I don't mind...
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