Over the Bullshit, feedback plz :D

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    Zarex said:

    Default Over the Bullshit, feedback plz :D

    From a collab I did the other day, kinda personal cuz that was the collab topic so yea, enjoy and feedback

    As a kid, I tried to act my shoe size, **** my age
    Teacher beat my *** while wise, explains the rage
    Was taught to respect size, so I walked with swagger for days
    Was caught up in some lies, pretended past was in a haze

    Haters said I was too short till I shot the half court ball
    Told me I was dumb, changed grades like it was fall
    Said I couldn't hang so I grew trees at the mall
    Complained I wasn't dope so I stopped cutting them all

    Now look, I'm spittin semen while they yakkin up tar (no homo)
    They book a session meanwhile I buy out the whole bar
    They collectin loose cents while my bricks break to dimes
    U struggle to pay rent, I'm laughing you back behind

    These kids cookin nothin but rocks, I'm rockin stew
    *****es wet like my socks, for my ****, its not tht lewd
    Whose the one scrappin plates, where's the hate u loved to place
    I'm above expectations, AP at steady pace

    [Hook]

    [Verse 2]
    With my 'rents, it wasn't what u knew or what u cud brew
    For Pa it was the grades that measured how u cud do
    For Ma it was the standards established that u had slew
    Overall it was some bullshit I somehow managed to pull

    To Pa, I was worthless so I slung rocks to buy the Payless
    To Ma, I was a ***** so I hung three like they were weightless
    Therapist said I was nuts, the **** didn't have one
    A rapist, they said Id be, in huts wud be my first one

    Yet I'm here, killin MCs and never touchin the bodies
    I'm hardly ever challenged, not retarded, I charge small fees
    Dope like the IV so ur lyin right beside me
    Ur Bs look nice, they look nicer inside a bag see?

    Anyways, I found a way and went over the bullshit
    Bucked and they jumped, parkinsons or a bull's hip
    Bruised lip, I left the haters with after I did vent
    Success the best revenge, serve cold for late lent
    Live a good, noble life and pay no attention as to whether gods exist. If they are just, they will judge you for your virtuous life, not your worship.
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    Bumppppppppppppp
    Live a good, noble life and pay no attention as to whether gods exist. If they are just, they will judge you for your virtuous life, not your worship.
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    bumpppp, for ur kids
    Live a good, noble life and pay no attention as to whether gods exist. If they are just, they will judge you for your virtuous life, not your worship.
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    bump swag
    Live a good, noble life and pay no attention as to whether gods exist. If they are just, they will judge you for your virtuous life, not your worship.
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    bumpppppppppppppppp
    Live a good, noble life and pay no attention as to whether gods exist. If they are just, they will judge you for your virtuous life, not your worship.
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    Is this rap? Because if so, then there's a subform just for rap lyrics review and I'm sure you'd get more responses there.
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    ya i got a copy of this one in that section
    Live a good, noble life and pay no attention as to whether gods exist. If they are just, they will judge you for your virtuous life, not your worship.