Untitled...for now

So where am I goin' now
I've lost my way somehow
This road before me's
Goin' nowhere fast

The path before me's fadin'
My whole life I've been jaded
Maybe it's time for me to start
Something that'll last (and forget the past)

Sitting on the front steps of a temporary home
Smoking my last cigarette, with nowhere else to go
The future sure is looking grim, not sure what I'm gonna do
Never meant for it to be this way, never meant to hurt you

But I can't run from my past, no matter how hard I try
Guess I'll have to learn to live, just like I've learned to lie

So where am I goin' now
I've lost my way somehow
This road before me's
Goin' nowhere fast

The path before me's fadin'
My whole life I've been jaded
Maybe it's time for me to start
Something that'll last (and forget the past)


Little more work done to it. A couple more verses, a little tweaking, and this should turn out all right.

Edited/Added on

why does everything you write seem so much better than mine!!!! lol

Originally Posted by pncl&ppr

why does everything you write seem so much better than mine!!!! lol

cos he's pro!

Ha thanks, but yeah, I mean to each his own. I personally think I'm nowhere near some of my favorite artists, and many people on ATL are great.