uhhh

i wish i could have it all
but work a little less
i try to handle it all
but i cant carry this stress
let it out, let it out
thats what they all say
but if i tell them now
they wouldnt know me the next day
so i lock it up and throw away the key
the road to success is a tollway
im just tryna come up with the fee
nanny mcphee dreams
they start ugly but they get better
lifes a b*tch
but i think i may stay with her
wheres the pied piper
we need some entertainment
im losin my mind
i guess i couldnt make the payments
im tryna make a statement
but everyone else keeps talkin
my dreams run away, but i keep stalkin
im creepin up
its almost in my grasps
i trip up and flip forward and land face down in the grass

pretty good man... As always It flowed pretty good. I would work on the Pied Piper line. stack a rhyme in that area to even it up a bit...
other than that... not bad brother. Not bad at all.

Yep I agree with Sk'n, it rolls good, and also his suggestion on the pied piper line. How about this little change?

but i think i may stay with her
wheres the pied piper
we need some entertainment
im losin my containment

Eh? Yes/no?