Something i started

Hello this is a piece I started looking for a little help finishing and for a title let me know what you think. This is just a piece on mind I know it needs a **** load of work but I like finishing them and then fixing them. Thanks



I am my own enemy*
What do i do
Where do I go
All I see*
All I see is hate
Hate is all I am
All I'll be
Nothing more to say
Nothing more to see
So what do you do
What do you get
All you get is hate
All that's left of me*
Everything that remains
Yeah!
This is real*
Im am the hatred you will embrace
Shut the **** up
Spit in my face

Good said, though you can change it a little bit so it sounds less emo, unless you were aiming for that

I do hard rock metal stuff. My other stuff people related me to slipknot idk