rap verses

Heres the first one im working on.

Wake up and good morning
im informing, with a tactical warning
rhymes pour down like its storming
hit the weed a little
belittle, the one that sees a rainbow of skittles
and then find my riddles
and it aint always sunny on the other side
step over one barrier could cost you suicide
brush aside
anger turns out to be jekyll and hyde mixed with a bit of confusion and pride
People do some dumb **** and dont think
but i aint one to talk
catch my wink out of my right eye and see a spark of jealousy like its the 4th of july
Its just another night
not by a blame sight but by an undivided right
that you get my attention
turned the corner
see a shadow, got your henchmen
and heres an extension
in this convention
one day i hope to retrie grab a pension
and try to carve out rhymes like a jack knife
I hope Kanye welcomes me to the good life

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