HAVE YOU SEEN MY GIRL awesome song part 1 written in 5 min

Hey mister, have you seen my girl
Beautiful lips eyes like diamond and pearls
You cant miss her face as bright as the moon
You cant miss her coz here comes the sonic boom
I told you but you said no
we just people but you gotta let go
Hey mister have you seen my girl
She has eyes as diamonds and gold and pearls
She couldnt leave me after all this time
Baby im gunna end thhis song coz i cant explain you with rhymes
whats this i held you so tight
But im gonna stay strong and go through this fight
Im gunna use everything, gunna use my might
I see you in the night
Baby because your eyes are like diamonds in the sky so big and bright
Hey mister, have you seen my girl
So beautiful like diamonds and pearls

Perhaps you should concentrate less on the amount of time it takes you, and more on the content.