Untitled yet again :-)

Conflicting memories
Waiting for the sun to rise
Am I meant for this life forever
It's too hard to open my eyes

Constricting agony
Drowning in my own lies
Suffocating; without air
I don't want to open my eyes

Leading this life
Breeding this lie
Cut all the ties
I have to you

No longer wondering why
I will not try
Try to forgive
And let die


And the the chorus would come in here. I was listening to Tool, so they may have influenced the lyrics. :-)

Is this about a love that has been killed due to infidelity and deceit?

I'm not sure what this is about. It just came to me.

hows about


you give way more than you take
but all you gave me was enough to break
all this **** it manifests
your bullshit lies and your stupid tests
it was all going to come out some how
if not then then why not now ?
(insert heavy *** guitar rift and sick drum beat) lol and that is all

Originally Posted by Inskeepruler

Conflicting memories
Waiting for the sun to rise
Am I meant for this life forever
It's too hard to open my eyes

Constricting agony
Drowning in my own lies
Suffocating; without air
I don't want to open my eyes

Leading this life
Breeding this lie
Cut all the ties
I have to you

No longer wondering why
I will not try
Try to forgive
And let die


And the the chorus would come in here. I was listening to Tool, so they may have influenced the lyrics. :-)

is this the response area??

ok now I know how this works, I think Anyway It definitely personifies guilt and something the writer has on his or her conscience

maybe a conflict as to whether life is worth it and should be ended before the sunrise. It has not been developed to maturity to where the message or story is understandable.