Lost

This is my first post here what do ya think

Chorus: We lost our fears, we lost are friends
We lost our years and it must end
When were done we’ve lost nothing
So that we may have something

And where the sun will rise again
A new day will dawn that will never end
Soon we’ll all sail away
Lost in the waters of oceans play

V1: Angels said I’d feel this way
I’d see our souls fly away
We never knew what they could be
But now I can finally see

V2: In the mourning of the dawn
We can find a bitter song
In the end it will show
What we have lost on this globe

V3: What ever happened to the days
Where all are lives would fade away
Now it seems to far away
To find the life of yesterday
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V4: The night is coming on strong
We’ll leave our love and be gone
To see another day go on
Where preachers preach and conners con

V5: For now love is the only way
For us to finally sail away
We’ll hit the stars of the night
So we can fly in the light

V6: Now I’m old, cold, and tired
I think I’ll warm up by the fire
Until the birds finally sing
I’ll never feel another thing
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Wow. Interesting concept. I really like the way you were able to make it somewhat dark without using the dark and lonesome language. I'm sorry if that offends you in any way. I'm sorry if my perception twisted the real mood and meaning of the song, but that's the kind of vibe I get from it. Dark, but hopeful.

No don't worry about it that is what I was shooting for. Thanks for your review.