SBU vs. Steve (ROUND 1)

16 lines, script flips allowed, diss due 48 hours after both of you post "Check In" in this thread
Rules we established earlier, check the original Battle Tourney Thread for them

check in. let's do this.

F*ck a check-in 48 hour type bullsh*t. Bars, fam.



'pause' before carnage like claws are advancing.. the tournament's started..
if you're sore, call the force of my thoughts an advantage.
you're 'flawed' as an artist.. break, head spinning..
my great depths bringing straight fresh vivid apex lyrics.

your grey speech structures may glean lustre..
my shine's so bright I'll make Steve wonder.

you should've.. stuck to watching others drop scripts.
good but.. unaccomplished.. underdog: 'sh*t'.

Steven, please fathom though, this contest's mine mate.
he's a weak rapper so.. his content's lightweight.

no, wait.. though 'eighth'..
Steve O's weed smoke's low grade.. ('f* that')
Steven fiends for needles... (vestax?)
neck snapped, nodding to dope hits... no sh*t,
I look at this game and transcend it..
you took 'Cash's place, but lack credit.



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don't sleep on the wordplay:

"pause/paws" ref: claws.
"flawed/floored as an artist".. so.. "floored", "break" and "head spinning" are also b-boy references. +
flawed=faulty . break=crumble . head spinning=confused.
"shine so bright I'll make steve wonder" ..wonder/think.. or stevie wonder/blind.
"underdog: sh*t".. his sh*t/style is rated as lesser/ the underdog ..or.. literally. under dog = [dog]sh*t.
"weak rapper"/ weak Wrapper- so can only carry light weight content.

"no, wait.." / no weight ..so..
"though eighth".. 8th place in this tournament ..or.. just 8th of an ounce, standard £20 bag of weed.
"low grade" low quality ..but..
"f* that" = 'f*ck that' ..or.. F* = fail* / low [exam] grade.
vestax= dj turntable needles.
"nodding.".. "dope hits"= fresh tracks ..or.. dope injections.
"took Cash's place".. rapper called Cash should've got the final slot instead. (see main tournament thread)
"but lack credit".. credit as in respect ..or.. credit/'Cash' (see previous).

Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! Fire SBU. Now where's Steve-o at? hahha

the 48 hours is the deadline, SWAGGGGGG ****in killed it

damn sbu you *ucking killed it. well steve-o it's up to you.

Who is Sbu, better yet why do we care,
Him telling me im no good,That is not fair,
He likes to make people feel bad,because he gets no attention,
this boy at school deserves a detenion,Because he likes making fun of kids,
This guys don't even know what talent is,cause he can't rap, and did i mention,
his lyrics are crap,I never had a problem with this guy
until he thought his lyrics was equal,with mine,why?
Im one of the best and don't even think you are,
so don't try and say you can rap me out by far,
Dude if you think you live in the streets,ill hit you with my car,
Dude your a piece of crap,you cant even rap,Ryme,Or even make a line,
writing songs and little disses,they wont get you no where,So don't even try,
Are you like 10 and don't have a friend?I can't explain,I don't know how?
Just pick up your pullupsand say,im a big kid now.You are nothing,
don't pretend like you are something.You don't get paid to ryhme like i do,
Have your mom change your diaper,I think you made a do doo,
One day you will reconize me on t.v and you will finally see,
thay you should't be dissin on me,I bet you listen to my Cd,
And just to let you know,You Dont Fck with steve0!!!!

Steve O, you just got murdered.
My vote goes to SBU.

im sorry i dont rap about drugs or anything like that.. i really dont care if he wins.. and i dont understand why your being so rude like that molotova

SBU, got that multi layered wordplay, punches were amazing, flowed like gunshot (to the neck)
SBU gets my vote

i didnt understand anything he was saying lol

Originally Posted by Steve0

i didnt understand anything he was saying lol

Eh, sorry to hear that. It did all make sense though, and I explained most of my wordplay afterwards. Nevermind.
Its all just about different styles and personal preferences, obviously.
I think your bars are decent.. solid angles, straight to the point and effective with it. peace, yeh.

I'm not trying to be rude, Steve. It's just a term I like to use when it comes to contests. And ehm, I don't rap about drugs either, that's not what makes rap good.

Originally Posted by Spacebar

no one here knows what the **** a battle verse is, and if any has problems, please don't hesitate to send a diss my way, i'll gladly reply

Thanks for the feedback. No, I've no problem with that, it's all subjective.
you're entitled to your opinion.
however wrong it might be

Yeah...Sbu killed him...BUT since he put MY name in it....
I feel compelled to drop some bars...

Sbu what the f*ck you gonna do?
imma leave you in the corner crying like a victim from SVU
Chew you up and spit you out like a piece of big league chew
I'm cocked and loaded, your stock is bloated, I'm so sweet, call me candy-coated

See I can get violent and be real frightening
Or slow my flow and be real enlightening
Or be like Dude f*cking bite me,
Why the f*ck would you ever wanna fight me?

I see like a visionary, you can call me a lyrical missionary
I see you prepping and grabbing your weapon
Now don't come at me half-stepping, I come as a blessing
I'm from another dimension, sit back and let me give you a lesson

So clever how I sever each measure, each fresh rhyme another treasure
Your luck has ended, got you stuck and suspended
Your just a 'toon, an animation
I sentence you to eternal damnation

Originally Posted by Cash

Yeah...Sbu killed him...BUT since he put MY name in it....
I feel compelled to drop some bars...

Sbu what the f*ck you gonna do?
imma leave you in the corner crying like a victim from SVU
Chew you up and spit you out like a piece of big league chew
I'm cocked and loaded, your stock is bloated, I'm so sweet, call me candy-coated

See I can get violent and be real frightening
Or slow my flow and be real enlightening
Or be like Dude f*cking bite me,
Why the f*ck would you ever wanna fight me?

I see like a visionary, you can call me a lyrical missionary
I see you prepping and grabbing your weapon
Now don't come at me half-stepping, I come as a blessing
I'm from another dimension, sit back and let me give you a lesson

So clever how I sever each measure, each fresh rhyme another treasure
Your luck has ended, got you stuck and suspended
Your just a 'toon, an animation
I sentence you to eternal damnation

I have a person u battle Cash, check out Space.

Originally Posted by Cash

Yeah...Sbu killed him...BUT since he put MY name in it....
I feel compelled to drop some bars...

Haha, thanks. Is that a vote?
Nice bars. I hope you won't be offended if I don't diss you back right now. maybe during the course of the tournament if you can still enter round one, vs space

All and all Sbu slayed this. Going Back to what space bar said is some what true. but in my P.O. his word play is awesome. it did take away from his punches but. damn....

as for Steveo great effort on your part. my vote would go to SBU on this one.

SBU sucks dude you cant be serious lol.. this who contest is one sided. I messed him up. You guys are all friends which makes this one sided. so go ahead keep going on with this i know this whole thing is so stupid

Originally Posted by Steve0

SBU sucks dude you cant be serious lol.. this who contest is one sided. I messed him up. You guys are all friends which makes this one sided. so go ahead keep going on with this i know this whole thing is so stupid

Even if we weren't his friend, we'd be impressed with his skills.