rap lyrics to a dirty south, new ageish heavey bass intsrumental

the songs course is the bass hit in my muh****in spaceship so i tried to stick to that space theme and will probably have sort of a big sean(ish) to it

as far as the flow goes ive taken out some words to make it fit but nothing major
what do you guys think, ive honestly never let anyone see my lryics before
too many metapohers, are they wack, be totally honest
ps. my spelling is ****ed i know,i havent taken the time to fix it yet


f*ck a drivers seat man im in the cockpit
hatin just a speed bump but since
im flyin you can never stop it
not that you could stop sh*t
kobe is what i spit
boy you betta duck before the
muhfcukin bass hits

oohp sh*t there it go
time to watch the legend grow
this that junkie sh*t you gotta shot
between your fu*king toes
man i dont just spit
i go fuc*in firehose
gator on the track bi*t*h
my flow is tim tebow

young neil armstong
man this sh*t my theme song
if kanye sh*t go gorilas
then i must be king kong
ground control to major tom
i guess this is so long
since im out of this world
pluto is where i belong

you call that H.A.M
man i call that balogn
young freddy kruger
chopin beats like pepperoni
flow so cold you gon need a zamboni
hate on me you zero
bi*c*h i call you rigatoni

If you want my opinion you are using lines that are kind've like "been there.... heard that...." meaning nothing really pops out and wows
It is good rhymes, good layout, some multi syllables I believe which is good... it's def. a great start if this is one of your first attempts, but if you want honesty you need to bump your originality up, create the stuff no ones seen, or over-the-top metaphor.

Keep up the good work though man