I'm No Animal

Hearts are wise and everything else
Your life was safe
I don’t know if,
you know the way

Snakes in my head are always,
catching me on the highway
Turn the mission off
I’ll never see you again

I don’t really know, you know?
And I don’t really know, you know?
I’m no animal...

Try it
Try it
And it always stays

Snakes in my head
Snakes in my head

I think I’m not gonna go away anymore
I think I’m not gonna go away anymore
The lights are shining so bright
Fate is looking in my door
So I’m thinking I’m not gonna go away anymore

I think I’m gonna follow you around anymore
I think I’m gonna fall
It ain’t going away for a while
Fate’s knocking at my door
So I think I’m not gonna come undone anymore

Why is it not easy,
I just don’t know…
Trying to figure out the road
No one really knows

You come into the world on your own
and that is the way you go
I just don’t know

Im not feeling the message...its not clear with the choice of words you use...im not downing your material/song...but everybody deserve the truth or an opinion...

I agree. Take out some off the lines. Try to get a clear cut message. It seems to be two song in one so try to split it up.

It is two songs in one, became too lazy. But yeah thanks for being the first two people to give a **** about something I write. I find it ironic that someone notices the worst piece of **** I put on here, but the stuff I like no one even stops to look at. But thanks nonetheless.

Well.......IIIIIMMMM SOOORRRRYYYyyy!!!!! LOL...it is hard for people to pay attention to the material you like the best...LOL...you just made my day. (no harm taken-no harm given)