Memories of You and I (my first song)

This is my first song, I wrote it on my acoustic with a pretty neat choice of chord progressions. Let me know what you think. Thanks!!!

When we first met
I didn't realize
just how lucky i was

it took some time
to see through my pride
how far i had fallen in LOVE

we would stay at home
all day long
just lying around in bed

we were the first to leave
all the parties
rather be together instead

I keep holding on
to these memories
of you and I
waiting for the day
to wake up with you
by my side


It feels like a year
since you've been here
with me everyday

and i must say
that no one has ever
made me feel this way

(last two in progress)


I keep holding on
to these memories
of you and I
I keep holding on
to these memories
of you and I

"It took some time
to see through my pride
how far i had fallen in LOVE"
I like that...i have an acoustic too...but I never play because its hard to switch chords..I can take it when the strings eat my finger tips..but its just switching chord to chord managing to keep rhythm...but all in all I like your song...I caught to rhythm quick and it had a nice flow-with the message!

Hey thanks a lot! Yeah if you wanna try and feel it out it is G, Bm, to Am for the verses then F, C, G, D for the chorus. I used o have the same problem with my fingertips, but after a month or so of playing everyday I couldn't feel a thing due to the calluses haha. But thanks again for reading! I really appreciate it!

Oh I just re read your comment. But Yeah I had that problem too. The only answer is practice practice practice. Try going back and forth between chords until you can get it up to speed then try another chord change.

Its pretty good for a first song. Hav u heard of all time low? As i was reading the lyrics i was imagineing the music in my head. It sounded like anamazing pop punk ballad! Oh and try getting a 3/4 guitar they have narrower necks so changing chords is easier. And as for the finger tip practi.ce

I've heard all time low by widespread panic. But its not punk by any means. I appreciate it though. I am thinking about posting more soon. I know I have a lot of work to do...to say the least haha