Hold You So Tight

Verse 1/
I want to show you some songs that I like,
A poem that you haven’t heard of,
Tell you a joke to make you smile,
I hope you don’t know the punch line,
I want to find a classic movie,
So we can cry when it ends,
I want you to open up babe,
And take me under your wings.

Chorus/
I want to stand on your door step,
And see the light turn on,
When you open up for me,
And let me in,
I want to be the girl you weren’t expecting,
To show up in the night,
I’m a faceless wonder,
Who wants to hold you so tight.

Verse 2/
I’d drive one thousand hours,
Just to see your face in the star light,
I want to make you laugh,
Make you tea and coffee and watch t.v.

Chorus/
I want to stand on your door step,
And see the light turn on,
When you open up for me,
And let me in,
I want to be the girl you weren’t expecting,
To show up in the night,
I’m a hopeless creature,
Who wants to hold you so tight.

So maybe one day we could get together,
Sit and watch the sun rise forever,
Even if it’s just for a while,
To see you smile,
At something that I have said,
Would be the dream I never had.

Chorus/
I want to stand on your door step,
And see the light turn on,
When you open up for me,
And let me in,
I want to be the girl you weren’t expecting,
To show up in the night,
Just a nameless vagabond,
Sleeping on your living room floor,
A naïve stranger,
Who wants to hold you so tight.

This is nice, I like this, but perhaps you want to consider your flow a bit, for example the chorus structure is very similar to that of the verse, and verse 2 is much shorter than verse 1, and maybe you want to call this bit a bridge:

"So maybe one day we could get together,
Sit and watch the sun rise forever,
Even if it’s just for a while,
To see you smile,
At something that I have said,
Would be the dream I never had."

Just a suggestion, keep posting