Worthless

here are some lyrics i just wrote recently, rate on a scale 1-10, 10 being highest. thanks


I don't know where I seem to be
I fit in, but that isnt me
i want to be different, and i want to be new
i cant understand it, whats with you?
is it just something that comes here,
ive felt it for just almost a year
but i dont know how to distinguish thoughts
i dont know how i can express what im taught
i express things that arent me but fake
much to get in this world, so much to take
i cant find my place in this lonely land
as i make my way across the sands
i want to be great, i want to be heard
so I use all ive got, and put it in words

[chorus]
i am still wondering at this madness
can some one help me feel fine
i feel close to worthless
and yet i feel this all the time

its so hard to understand this all
who to follow, i dont want to fall
i know things that i shouldnt do
but im depressed, as if i was you
dont want it to happen, everyone knows
my anger, agression, all of it shows
am i just the only one?
if so my life isnt done
or am i just one who cant realize it
the burning has started, a fire was lit
raging and hating, out of control
everything is now just a hell-hole

[chorus]

i dont get the fact that im the only one
the pressures unbearing, it all weighss a ton
and here now our souls are divided
broken and torn, wrapped and knotted
the amasses of people that we have alotted
everything seems to be fine
what is fine? to not cross the line?
i dont know, what does it mean?
to look past what others have seen?

[chorus]x2

Well, well, well....good job! You successfully created something that everyone can relate to, which is one of the main goals of music in general. If this is how you really feel, don't be scared to say it. Everyone feels like this at some point. You've got a gift. Maybe a bit raw, but you've got a gift. Don't be afraid to continue on with it, no matter what anyone around you says.