What you can't think of nothing?
I'm a linebacker an I'm rushing,
Let hate for you fill like stuffing
So I can destroy you and feel nothing.
Ill employ you if I need some **** thing
(You have an attitude that sluts bring)
So if a homie has a free Box spring...
Hit the corner, it wont cost nothing.
Sorry "dog-spit" but I hear nostik lost it
Reply is, did he ever find it? Wasn't he catastrophic?
He soft spit like his mom did on my long ****
An the only punch he packed was fruit, no boss ****
I can come up with long scripts, but what gets is my quick whit
I can pop off at the lip while your lookin at you pen tip.
and when I end it, you can almost hear that lady sing
Wait for the door.......
Yeup she then left the buil-*ding*!
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When you fall back, your soft raps are your cushion,
Haters can't see me, such as you, like you ain't lookin'
Me on your mind, like your bisexual. . .My rhymes are so-very intelectual
Never play lotto, I don't believe in luck, you try to diss me like I really qive a f*ck,
You know you don't want beef, like your a veqetarian,
Youve been bad I think you should be taken to a vetenarian.
Your rhymes are friqhtninq', but I shall smite thee, with my raps of liqhtinq'
As I aware he,
Who does not beware, my f*ckin' slick lines,
I qot problems on my mind. . .But you ain't none of mines
Your not a problem. . .your more like a pest,
You say im callinq out the best, n*qqa you better impress,
Im beinq serious. . . Nd'your delusional,
See qo on, or say im better, quitinq's not choosable. -
Look don't rush me, Im thinkin'
My rhymes hit so hard, Ill leave you limpin'
You think I lost it, but really I flossed it,
Where do your flaws hit ?
I quess in your lyrics, mines are like quantum physics,
I think Ill use my vocab now that its serious.
Im impressive, somewhat aqqressive, more like suqqested,
By hard qoin' emcees unlike you, who is rejected
How does it feel to be a reject,
I fly so hard, I don't even have to eject.
Your too indirect, Im perfect-ed
From my perspective, your suspected.
Lookin' like you jus' came to the qame, with a shame
That your lame, Tahaa, Nd' no fame, your too easy to tame
No name, Smooth ? Slick move, sike, you know how I do,
My childish plays, for days, havin' you qaze,
Come in my maze, your too amaz-ed over my haze.
These lyrics will torture you,
Unlace off like a damn shoe, Smooth too, will be proved
Who's the best, better than you. -
"Smite thee" is my spin, "lightning"...tis my thing.
I'm fin(e)ding,
You're aight with spitting **** til ur lips sting.
If your lines are sick, than I'm dementia dip ****...
You got the common cold,
I'm the scurvy of old with ticks kid.
Me quit? That's cute an all,
Eat uthynol...no dispute who'll fall.
There's truth to it all, you've hit a wall,
No longer can draw a "last straw".
I'm gettin stronger partner, found out you got a glass jaw.
And rap raw... making people sick cuz you ain't thawd.
You claim intellectualism? Mislead perspective vission.
I get you got a speacial mission, but beating me wont happen, listen...
You never play the lotto? Well you should luck don't give a ****
You can be a tone deff mutt in a rutt and get your digits up.
I ain't a veegan but speakin bout green's got me tweakin
I'm succeeding and best bet im countin stacks this evening.
Tell me again... not on your mind??? Well your responding to my rhymes...
Cuz your stubbornness wont admit that I emit better lines -
Someone else step in I done put his torch out
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Smooth thug you handle your self well bro....You say you're a novice but whem I read your stuff it like you've been doing this for years...Props...
My advice would be to try and keep your multi syllibale count ryhming per each Syllible....makes it flow better. Stacking rhymes also will do the trick...
for example...using your last line
this tresured time
emit better lines
thats just an example...it's up to you to put it to work..
I hope this helps...Peace Love Empathy
Sk'nDeep -
Yea thanks man that is helpful. I just tried something to that effect on the official battle thread following up on sbu's naaarly script ha. I think it worked out
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Now, I don't think Im wastin' my damn time,
Jus' usin' up headlines, perhaps, tho' Im qivin' you damn siqns.
Ok Im 15 precisely, Ill qive you one in your head,
With my lyric power, Your hit, done, nd' your dead
Im exactly, well known, around my whole hood,
People I know, are no qood,
Livin' harshly, movin' larqely
Smooth Ill have you beat up, nd' shatter'd,
Nd' leave you there like it did'nt really matter.
You call yourslef "Smoothtung", But you can't keep up with your own lunq(s),
Not have you buried, but dunq-ed,
My words comin' out will have you plunqed,
Keepin' it done, by the moment, you reply,
You'll have a dead eye, nd' maybe say the best is I -
Nostik you go hard man, efforts are persistant. I like that. Some advice would be ...and I said it before...try an make your lyrics s make sense. In every aspect with every rhyme. But you're getting there dog. I just started rappin a month ago, maybe less so if you got potential (which you do it seems) you can get pretty dope real quick. So keep at it. Maybe check out some emcees on here. Both skn and sbu are real good and offer some helpful advice too...
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If youre not wasting your time, you sure are mine.
Ur using "headlines" I / use heads with dead lines..
Fine.. you're "giving signs" in lights neon and bright,
It reads "I'm 15, an chewing more than I can bite" .
Surely you must-be per-versely confused homie...
Ill have you bleedin-up in the seat-of my beat-up loaned jeep
Yes. I'm smoothtung, a rude one who will use puns,
I "play on words" while you run,slip and start to ooze runs.
Yes my friend guess again "you are suggested, but to end it"
My pen tip/ pens you ****, and ill be damned if I don't deffend it.
My dead eye? Hah why? Are your lines prime? Do they kill?
F*ck ill slice you like bill ta say " you never had strong will"
Perversely/per verse
Play on words= definition of pun
"Slip,run and ooze runs" = pun
"Pen tip/pens you" = pun
"Do they kill?" And "slice u like bill" kill bill reference
You're gettin better dogLast edited by smoothtung; 10-28-2011 at 09:55 PM.
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Its battlin dawg, no hard feelings with any sh*t
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I turn and face my flaq. . . pledqe of alleqiance, I know you dont want beef, like you n*qqas are veaqans,
I qotcha', when you said . . . "no hard feelinqs'", But, you act like I don't know, with who the f*ck Im dealinq
My rhymes qo hard nd' hiqh, they pass the f*ckin' ceilinq, I know you know that I . . .am not a human beinq
So beware when you step to my. . . Mysterious black Phan'om, Keepin' friqht in your eyes, call my sh*t dark phantom
Nomore hatin' crimes, f*ck discrimination, they say my pieces are waste of time, n*qqa stop hatin'
Thuq til' I die, oriqinal 2pac leqend, Reppin' Wes'Side, Biqqie Smalls, Who Shot Ya, testin'. -
Originally Posted by _Nostik_Go_Hard
My radiant nature's erased some "blacker phantoms",
you seem like a street fighter; got a Blanka canvas;
I'll blaze em like Rayden and reign as the thunder struck;
you'll only "pass the ceiling" if I finish with an uppercut.
or "Thug" sh*t with a hundred guns;
so..
..thought that you're raw? guy's crazy;
I gots.. forty 'four-fours', like jay-z.
..I'd bring deep lines but I'm deadlier too;
I gots.. sixty 'nines', like lesbians do.
I've gone beyond "2 pack", I'm 'more' like a shipment freight.
bro's clips 'No-Stick'; they ricochet.
"2 Pac"? ya.. too -backward- ; (and 'Smooth's bland dude) ;
My "thug" stuff's in 'double'time ; (guns of mine'll 'caP 2').Last edited by _SBU; 10-29-2011 at 04:53 AM.
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Your flag of studded stars, are my star-studded short stories
Cover you parched heart and behold me in "all-me" glory
(Oh)I say you can see I'm surely rapeing you statutorely.
You're too young for my "smooth tung" son that's self explanitory.
Guns r mighty dangerous,tho don't mention em if they ain't calked
Jay-z had potency your concoctions ain't worth one glock
You cant bring deep lines even if casting in-to the abyss
All your hooks go adrift and when you spit they're a-(uhh)miss
You cap2 if back-to school capping pens...friend
I captivate my captive's who fend their gay trendsLast edited by smoothtung; 10-29-2011 at 02:05 PM.
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Sayin' you qoh' fo'ty "fo'fos'" like Jay-Z. . .I qot my n*qqas strapped up, like F banqin' Weezy. . .
Queasy. . .My sh*ts qot you feelin' dizzy, Don't like my chicks sinqle, like em' in twos like Drizzy,
Im busy, f*ck bizzy bone, Yo' moms' a b*tch. . .female doq, fetch, qive the doq a f*ckin' bone,
Your all alone, your callin' for help, but cut off your fone. . . no tone, Im in the zone, qet biq or qo home. . .
Ill snatch SBU, throw him infont of a f*ckin' train. . .tie Jay-Levi up to a full tank of propane. . .
Call me insane, Im fain, cold blood runnin' thru my vain. . .
Now what do I do with Smoothtunq ? . . .
Possibly cut off his own tonque, or shun, or qet both done. . .
I could do either one. . .
My lyrical judqement. . .the day I shock the world is comin',
Have you sh*ttin' bricks, whistlin' n' hummin'. I done it. . .
I ain't a one hit -wonder where you are, now,
Possible how, you wonder how do I wow, critics,
It does'nt take no physics, qet it. I run my buisness,
Work it out. . .like fitness. -
I spit sick like a llama with herpes
Y'all just keep bringin' drama and worries
While I'm in every state just like the embassies
Smile as I'm debated over the seven seas
They fake me more than expensive brands
'Cuz I make sure my rhyme's intensive man
Stick a broom in ya mouth and wipe the floor with you
Pick another room to 'write' 'cuz you're too boring dude
So listen son, it ain't worth the fight, I haven't even planned this
I got this bump from a Google Earth satellite, that shows my grandness
U fxck it up on the mic and blame the dude next to ya
Gotta like fill ur pants mayne, do the sumo wrestler
But uh, even winamp calls me a player
I'm a real champ and my flow blows so I'm a stayer
I say no matter what u tell me, we all know I'm on it
The way to a man's heart is through his belly & I'mma let ya vomit1 <3 -
Originally Posted by Molotova
you've got a 'tighter' chest, but think you're bringing viral phlegm?
this "llama with herpes" gettin' put down.. I'm a 'vet'.
It's hard to know where girl's been lately;
"llama"?..no. "herpes"?..maybe.
think that you're "sick".. what? your 'skill's not hiphop.
why try a comeback? f*ck that.. p*ss off.
masochist chick yeah? like to be dissed lots?
love it when guys are all up in your 'inbox'?Last edited by _SBU; 10-29-2011 at 08:37 PM.
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Paaaaha damn dog. Ph ha nice **** to both of ya. We all know no hard feelins. This is the game
..I love it
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Word. We've battled before and Molotova knows that I've got nothing but respect for her and her style.
Welcome back
No 'beef', I've 'herd' more 'baars' than sheep farmers
but my reign beats your 'umbrella -Ella- ay'? like rihanna's.
