tell me wat you think im new at rapping

i just started lu-kange ill finish em
i'll go down in history my haters i'll diminish em
imma monster imma Tare up the beat no one on
the corner has swaggalike me stay rocking skinnies wit
the vans on just murdered the beat an got my freddy on
the call me jaybreezy hear my lyrics catch a cold get my
homer on oh-doh

Jay,
I see this has potential seems unfinnished..not bad for a green emcee though ...keep praticing..from here you can olny get better...
check some of the emcees on here to get the feel of things. send me a pm if you need some help...

thanks for the advice i'll keep practing

Hop in one of these threads and just write. Good practice

Can any of you help me with lyrics for the song miss me by drake im trying to write a songto the intrumental

Post everything you got with a link to the beat on a new thread and we can help

i need another verse can you guys help

Girl you on my mind cause I’m always dreaming
I think about our love cause that’s what I believe in
Your eyes so nice better than the stars
You blew me out this world I had to chill on mars
Im out this world in the universe of love
So beautiful like a angel from above
Yeah you lit my heart up like I hit the sun
You won the race to my heart now your #1
My heart beats like music and you get the tune
They say our love is silly like a bunch of lunney tunes
Our love is so unique like a fairy tale on a rate of 1-10
Girl you break the scale

“Hook”
Girl you got me in the stars
I really don’t where we are
But I don’t care
Cause ill know you’ll be wit me
And ill be there when you want me to be
Universe universe of love 3x