It wont be long

This is my first time posting my lines on the internet
so please give me your honest opinion. Did this song over J. Cole's "It Won't Be Long" have a second verse will post depending on comments from this one.

I say it won't be long they think about MCDonald's
Think about about prison
Like there ain't another topic
Like me bein famous and goin for the tropics
wasn't even a discussion
Talkn bout chains but not about the pain that came when my momma had to drain her bank
Tryna feed her kids but can't even get Kool-AID
All her money goes to bills when she gets paid
Can't even buy herself somethin nice earrings seem like lika lost dream
But I been watchn momma
And when I drop ima hit these clouds straight runnin
Not goin for the money, not goin for the glory
I'm going for every thing that'll ever make you happy
That's my plan now as a man
I gotta go up or I'll be Damned
I'll never be a sham
I ain't never quiet cause I gotta stay amped
Theres a light in me like I'm known for eating lamps
I'm a lion inside see this skin is a jungle
I'm tired of bein humble
Tryna build a buzz like bumble
Push my lines back, man they tryna make me fumble
Plot to put me in a grave, watch em get they shovel
But even down there yall can't match my level
Can't remember my troubles
Can't walk in my puddles
But now I'm strong....CAUSE I KNOW IT WON'T BE LONG

Lovveee it, its awesome!! put the rest up =] tis great x

Wow.
This is really great stuff. Powerful. Brilliant.
Keep it up!!