Out Cold

more recent song. kind of deep, lots of profanity but i edited it, (yes i slipped an F bomb in there :-o) not a life story... so dont go feeling sorry for me lol.



sit back, wait to fall
"nothing comes easy when you know it all"
you say you cant help, its not your fault
you're not the one lyin outside the hall

breathe deep, count to ten
if it dont work try again
but why bother tryin if in the end (you fail)
its not that easy to digest
that afterall, you tried your best
and the truth hurts, youre not like the rest
your life is different its just a mess

[chorus]
and - its unknown how you feel
when they say its not a big deal
when youre gone theyll wonder why
theyre on the streets and cant get by

ive told you once, how i felt before
when youre all f'd up, out cold on the floor
blood runs down as it starts to pour
hurts so much it dont no more

youve found different things to do
everyday youve got something new
now so frequent its a part of you

what happened to the one i know
rumor has it you let it go
gun to the head takes one blow
didnt even know you felt that low

[chorus]

you never wanted to die
but you stuck every needle in your eye
when things got bad you started to cry
so you ended it all just to fly

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