Title: You or Me (leave comments)

I asked for your hand one time
you told me no you don't feel the same
Fine with me I wont push you on
I ask for a hand only once
don't think it right to push and push
yet I hear you wish you could go back
change what you said
now we stand back to back!

(chorus)
Will it be you or me to cross the line
to say the word that'll bring our hearts togeather as one
you who hate being the one to make first move
I who only asks once and not again
Who will be the one to cross the line that divides us
Will it be you or me!
I stare as you walk by and I think of you
you think of me when I'm away
you can't stand me being away
our hands extend seperated by a wall
Will it be you or me who crosses that line
(chorus end)

I never ask twice
dont believe in pushing to get my way
If you want me then you can now come to me
I know I want you
but I know you don't like to be pushed
when you say no its no
just get over it

(chorusx2)
Will it be you or me to cross the line
to say the word that'll bring our hearts togeather as one
you who hate being the one to make first move
I who only asks once and not again
Who will be the one to cross the line that divides us
Will it be you or me!
I stare as you walk by and I think of you
you think of me when I'm away
you can't stand me being away
our hands extend seperated by a wall
Will it be you or me who crosses that line
(chorus end)

In your eyes i see
The sadness when I walk away
my heart beat faster when your near
I know I still want to be yours
i hear your voice and a smile shows on my face
how can we break though this wall
i want you and i think you want me to

(chorusx3)
Will it be you or me to cross the line
to say the word that'll bring our hearts togeather as one
you who hate being the one to make first move
I who only asks once and not again
Who will be the one to cross the line that divides us
Will it be you or me!
I stare as you walk by and I think of you
you think of me when I'm away
you can't stand me being away
our hands extend seperated by a wall
Will it be you or me who crosses that line
(chorus end)

Hi Mr Alexander,

This is eloquently written. Some very good phrasing: "I hear your voice and a smile shows on my face". << Beautiful!!!

The chorus' are very long which makes the song long. But, some songs are. All in all, it's very nice.